by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper
Friday, May 07, 2004
Rated "G" by the Author.
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I don't care if there's no sun in the sky,
not even if there is a cry why,
even if you have no love,
or no love flies you above,
if God closes his holy gates,
then takes away all loving mates,
we are better off living a life of love,
whether hates tries to shove.
Don't have it,
you know what it is!
You know how it makes you feel,
loves touch is a forever thrill.
Love in all forms equals happiness,
and there's no need to be right in a face.
Love can fly over the oceans,
nothing can stop this God given power.
Love lives inside all of us,
it is hates alternative to joy.
The devil wants us to give up on love,
even self love affection.
No one else to love,
love the jell out of yourself.
You'll glow like a neon light,
feel better in power might.
People who love are greedy,
they hog as much of life as possible.
You'll find them smiling for practically nothing,
even if they don't have anything.
They'll dance the floor alone,
even when everyone else is gone.
You see, the math is simple,
accept anything less,
lifes going to be a mess.
Oh, life will still be a mess with or without love,
but at least you won't be a total failure.
You can't put out a strong flame burning,
even when disaster is churning.
We're happier loving!
even in the mist of hating,
stronger mind equating,
best choice dictating.
Only a fool will have no love outside,
then also destroy it inside.
You lose twice,
lifes cold ice.
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|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Beautiful moving piece Grady!!
|Reviewed by June Thompson
I've only just come to this realization myself this past year or so (in depth anyway)
|Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
|This is awesome Grady...and so true...
when love fills the heart we dont ned
anything else..great write..floria
|Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
|What a true tonic this is.Bang on time too.....|
|Reviewed by Denise Edwards
|I also agree. Great write, Grady!|
|Reviewed by Debashish Haar (Reader)
|I agree with Sandie, friend great conveyance of a message...Great write on wisdom...
|Reviewed by Sandie Angel
|Great wisdom of words, Grady!
~ Sandie Angel a.k.a. May Lu ~