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| Reviewed by Sarah Tagert |
5/17/2004 |
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| this is one of your best is a while! |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
5/15/2004 |
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(((michelle)))
powerful, powerful write--so beautiful and courageous!
you are a survivor, as well--one who takes other's feelings into consideration before your own--a heroine in my eyes, you are
(((HUGS))) and love, karla.
*STANDING OVATION!* |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
5/15/2004 |
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you are a good friend to dana sue and melissa; i am sure they are blessed to have you as a friend! i certainly am, and i am glad you are keeping them in prayer in their time of need! that's what friends are for; keep on praying, and i will join you in prayer for dana sue and melissa!
love you, sweets! can't wait until july either!! YAHOOOOOOO!!!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :D |
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| Reviewed by P. Michaels |
5/15/2004 |
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Thank you, Michelle for this caring poem. Sometimes we begin to believe that nobody cares, then there are people like you who speak up. I recently wrote a poem called "Oh Lord!" and hardly anyone read or commented on it. I wasn't trying to to be arrogant, nor was I trying to preach. I was only trying to deal with the news that I had just been told. I have cancer. After I wrote it, I read very angry poems about people who write about what I write. Thank you again.
You have my Christian love,
Patty |
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| Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya |
5/14/2004 |
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| My prayers are with your friends...love n luck...BUWAN |
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| Reviewed by Jim Dunlap |
5/14/2004 |
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I think this line:
'On my home at high.'
should read "in my home on high".
I hope your friends get better, but having outlived most of mine, I know how those things mostly go. At least they have you supporting them. Many people never have anybody. |
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