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Yamaya
by Michelle Smolen
Sunday, May 16, 2004
Rated "PG13" by the Author.
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The Ocean's Power |
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****************************************** ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Pondering the Texas sky over the Ocean. The vibe's so right it blurs your vision. Yamaya, The Ocean she summons me. Beauty in blue, as deep as the the eyes can see. She pulls me in... deeper still, whispering my name, bending my will. As toes sink in grainy sand She gently takes you by the hand. Your sences seduced, your caressed down by the shore. Breathing her in, only to crave more. Her passion crashes into you, beckoning to enter her. Submitting to her undulations, the need becomes an urge, Foam tickles, and power licks, your toes, ankles, thighs,& hips... her salty taste upon your lips. Until you can walk no more, Yamaya's embrace resonates , within your core. draw her power, feel her force. Let yourself be healed by the source. To bathe in the reflection of the sky. Now ~ I bathe in the reflection of your eyes.
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| Reviewed by Peter Paton |
2/21/2006 |
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Utterly sublime Michelle
So glad to have met another exponent of the Light !
You are now being tracked by me...:)
Blessings
Peter |
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| Reviewed by Charles O'Connor III |
2/16/2006 |
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"Now I bathe in the reflection of your eyes" a phrase to go down in history.
awesome job. |
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| Reviewed by Divinity 11 |
2/7/2006 |
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| beautiful! i love it! the solitude and peace i found in a topsy turvy childhood were moments spent at a condo on the beach while finding myself on the balcony, awake before everyone else and just lost in the sounds of the waves crashing on the shore |
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| Reviewed by Mark Rockeymoore |
12/25/2005 |
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| and so the goddess lives in every undulation of the waves, in every permutation of the heart and soul...a beautiful, soulful write, poet, i hope that you are enjoying the season! |
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| Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader) |
11/20/2005 |
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| Some terrific imagery there. Having lived in Texas for 10 years, there is something about the state and the 'tude, that you can't forget. It's a beautiful place. |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
10/24/2005 |
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| beautiful poetry! |
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| Reviewed by Lori Moore |
6/3/2004 |
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This is beautiful. It makes me a little homesick, even though the California beaches and sunsets on the Pacific are hard to beat.
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| Reviewed by Jim Dunlap |
5/18/2004 |
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| You have a great eye for detail. |
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| Reviewed by Roxanne Smolen |
5/16/2004 |
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| Makes me wish I were there. :) |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
5/16/2004 |
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(((michelle)))
a seductor, the ocean is...drawing you into her depths until there is no escape. fine writing here--well done!
(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :( |
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