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Esra Karatash Alpay

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A Swoon by Esra Karatash Alpay Saturday, May 29, 2004 Not rated by the Author. Share Print Save Become a Fan
I feel a swoon, I fall across, Stretching towards the moon, Reaching out to touch, My dreams of fantasy, That never seem to make much, Sense and conscience are lost, In this weather of winter frost.

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Reviewed by Regis Auffray	5/29/2004

The images convey meaning and emotion. I agree with Lori. I'd lose the commas. Thank you for this offering, Esra. Love and peace. Regis




Reviewed by Lori Moore	5/29/2004

I enjoyed your poem, though grammatically, most of your commas are out of place or unnecessary. You have presented some interesting images.