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A Swoon
by Esra Karatash Alpay

Saturday, May 29, 2004
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I feel a swoon,
I fall across,
Stretching towards the moon,
Reaching out to touch,
My dreams of fantasy,
That never seem to make much,
Sense and conscience are lost,
In this weather of winter frost.


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Reviewed by Regis Auffray 5/29/2004
The images convey meaning and emotion. I agree with Lori. I'd lose the commas. Thank you for this offering, Esra. Love and peace. Regis
Reviewed by Lori Moore 5/29/2004
I enjoyed your poem, though grammatically, most of your commas are out of place or unnecessary. You have presented some interesting images.
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