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|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|The images convey meaning and emotion. I agree with Lori. I'd lose the commas. Thank you for this offering, Esra. Love and peace. Regis|
|Reviewed by Lori Moore
|I enjoyed your poem, though grammatically, most of your commas are out of place or unnecessary. You have presented some interesting images.