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  An Eye Opener
by Mr. Ed
Wednesday, June 23, 2004
Rated "G" by the Author.

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Five little babies


Opened their ten little eyes.


I gazed in wonder


Such a wondrous surprise.




If only mankind


Had the innocence of these kits,


Can you even imagine


This world and its bliss?




I truly hope these kittens


Have very good lives,


In their lovely new homes,


Or I’ll need a lovely new wife!



Spent the day gazing in awe

At these five newborns

As they opened their eyes to the world

For the very first time.

Momma Patty is doing fine, too.


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Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain 4/14/2005

Your compassion truly shines in this beautifully composed poetic write ... lovely!!


Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 6/24/2004
Well written Ed!!

Reviewed by Katy Walsvik 6/24/2004
Ah... Ed... the mere fact that their first sight was of you guarantees a smooth ride, for they saw deep, lasting love looking back at them. You are the hope of the future. katy xox.
Reviewed by ~Indigo~ Elga 6/24/2004
I'd take all five and add to those I already have, but that would leave me to finding a new hubby - lol. Since I already have 20 big eyes. I sure hope they find a good home.

Purrfect write.

Reviewed by Jane Rodway 6/23/2004
I smiled the minute I saw these sweet babies!!! I just love kitties, and these are adorable!! This is a lovely poem, I am still smiling after reading it:)
Reviewed by Claywoman 6/23/2004
Gee, I'd take at least two of them, but I live so far away from Chicago...sniff....they are gorgeous...
Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie 6/23/2004
This was so sweet and lovely, the little kitties are so cute!

Reviewed by Fletcher Bailey (Reader) 6/23/2004
Ed...I need a kitty to keep Garfi you fedex...great loving poem...Fletcher B
Reviewed by E T Waldron 6/23/2004
Oh Ed! I want one;-)How adorable! You are a great dad and your wife a wonderful mom!;-)Thanks for sharing this with us!All the best to the newest members of the family and to their mom Patty!
Reviewed by John Banasiewicz Jr 6/23/2004
If they really new what was head ,, I ownder would they close their eyes and just slip back into their mother.
Nice write and cute kittens there
Reviewed by J. Allen Wilson 6/23/2004
Excellent piece Ed, our lady had six this week, but only four remain...
Reviewed by Ed Matlack 6/23/2004
Geez, another cat lover...LOL! Hope you find homes for them, keep them in your area we seem to have enough feral cats around here but rufuz keeps them at bay and up in trees...LOL! Ed & Rufuz
Reviewed by Kate Clifford 6/23/2004
It is fasinating watching the young as they grow, their first experience, the first sighting of a butterfly, the first kill, yum :-)
Loved your write.
Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger 6/23/2004
I loved it Smoochy Man!!! Picture very was cute too!!! So sorry Ed, I am allergic to cats… small ones or the eight foot tall ones!!!

Truly hope these kittens
Have very good lives,
In their lovely new homes,
Or I’ll need a lovely new wife!

HAHAHAHAHA…Ed, It’s more better to able looking out the window… then rather looking in…huh???!!!!… Happy wife = Happy Life!!!

Thanks for sharing it, Poet!!!
Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz (Reader) 6/23/2004
Makes me want to rub my cheek against those cute little
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner 6/23/2004

if i were a cat, i'd purr contentedly

aw, what the hell :) *purrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr*

four paws up, ten claws up (unless they're polydactyl, then it's more) LOL--ADORABLE!

give mama patti and all five kitties a pat and a purr from me

(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)
Reviewed by Kay P Devenish 6/23/2004
This poem is so purrs!
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader) 6/23/2004
But what if they were eight foot bigger
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader) 6/23/2004
Thank you for sharing, next best thing to being there!

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