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|Reviewed by jude forese
|excellent alliteration! will the hordes of haunted cries listen? ...|
|Reviewed by Ronald Hull
|There is strength in numbers. It is indoctrination I fear.|
|Reviewed by Sandie Angel
|Wonderful and inspiring.
~ May Lu a.k.a. Sandie May Angel ~
|Reviewed by Sharon Palmer
|Dawn, I loved this. I am a huge fan of alliteration, and you have the gift -- enough to impact, but not so much that it overpowers. . . . Alliterations beg for a delicate touch, and you have that! Very nice work!