by Peter Paton
Friday, July 16, 2004
Rated "PG" by the Author.
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Our sacred love , heaven has devised , this gift for us .
A blinding flash , a searing star , this was meant to be .
So enter our love , and let's be glad ,
And feel the touch of passion .
A sacred union , a forged elation ,
Enjoined hearts , a wondrous station .
Trust and fidelity , are so fond ,
So gentle and tender , this divine bond .
Oh sacred love , we'll embrace forever ,
And wander , a new found way .
Entwined souls , and rapturous minds ,
How sweet this joy to be .
Copyright Peter Paton 2004 .
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|Reviewed by ~Indigo~ Elga
Beautiful inpsiring poetry.
well written Peter... love
is indeed supposed to be
a sacred union.
|Reviewed by Amira van Kerk
|Can only repeat what the others already wrote: Romantic and powerful write about love.
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Heavenly beautiful words you penned here Peter!!
|Reviewed by Carma Stewart (Reader)
|Lovely reminder of the passion uniquely given to that peculiar creature that is mostly animal and part divine. I feel happy when my man says he saw stars. ;)|
|Reviewed by Linda Hill
|Awesome write, my friend...
Romantic and tender
Your talent shines through in this, Peter
|Reviewed by George Carroll
|Absolutely romantic my friend. Great write|
|Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger
|Very sensual and openly expressed romantic poetry, Peter!!!… Excellent piece of work!!!… Well-done, Poet!!!… Love on!!!|
|Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers
Romantic, sensuous, and a delight to read. Very well penned.
|Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
|This is sweetly romantic wonderful poetry Peter!|
|Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
|Very lovely and romantic poetry!
|Reviewed by J. Allen Wilson
|Beautifully written poem of adoration Peter. Wonderful romantic flair, that allows the heart to soar without a care.
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|This is glorious poetry, Peter!I feel uplifted
envisioning this splendid kind of love!
Thank you for sharing!