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A Trip to Mars
by Abdi-Noor Haji Mohamed (Eagle Of Hope)

Sunday, July 18, 2004
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Next time I should be careful

Today it is my second day in Mars
It is a marvelous place to come
I paid a visit to many sites
I toured Insects' General Hospital
Doctor Termite was the manager
In the emergency ward, I met a nurse
Thirty mosquitoes were being treated
Cause of their accident was strange
They at once landed on a tree branch
causing the branch to fall
Some of them died
Others were wounded
In the middle of my visit
My eyes caught a familiar face
She was Miss Butterfly
She was my girlfriend
I rushed to greet her with hugs
But I was soon hospitalized
my lower lip got swollen
She stung me so bitterly
Have I made a mistake?
Have I kissed the wrong friend?
No. I didn't
She was butterfly herself
But in Mars the story is different
Things work in a more unusual way
Buterflies do give honey and sting
Bees don't.

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Reviewed by Amira van Kerk 7/19/2004
Outstanding write.
Enjoyed this one.
Reviewed by Lori Moore 7/18/2004
Interesting trp. The bugs are everywhere these days.
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado 7/18/2004
Quite fascinating, Abdi-noor; thanks for the journey! Glad I could come along! LOL

(((HUGS))), love, and continued prayers~ As always, your friend and sister in America, Karen Lynn in Texas. :D
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner 7/18/2004
(((abdi-noor)))

a uniquely penned vacation into realms unknown...thanks for taking me with you--well done! thought provoking piece

(((HUGS))), love and continued prayers, karla. :)
Reviewed by Mr. Ed 7/18/2004
A fascinating trip, Abdi-Noor. After you recover from your butterfly sting, would you care to join BUG?!
Reviewed by M.Bennett Hooper (Mikii) 7/18/2004
Love the line ,"butterflies do give honey and sting bees don't." Mars is indeed whimsical and different. Peace and blessiiings my friend.
Reviewed by Safi Abdi 7/18/2004
Mars seems like a very tiny place:)
Safi
Reviewed by jude forese 7/18/2004
well done ... sounds familiar ...
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