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| Reviewed by Kate Burnside |
8/9/2004 |
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| This little volcano has a hot, lava flow content which fully erupts in the last four lines - explosive! The earth moves!! Awe-inspiring and delightful - especially like the homage that nature pays to love; truly like the delight that is woven into the mystery of all things created and which in itself is what the creative process is all about. Being at one with the natural earth inspires love. Bless you, Kate xx |
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| Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain |
7/20/2004 |
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| Romance conceived with excellence - a gifted write! |
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| Reviewed by John Banasiewicz Jr |
7/20/2004 |
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Most romanic write ...eyes relecting what your heart feels..
Very lovely poem
Tommy |
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| Reviewed by Abdi-Noor Mohamed (Eagle Of Hope) |
7/20/2004 |
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| Very beautiful and exceptionally romantic. Loved this poem. |
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| Reviewed by Fletcher Bailey (Reader) |
7/19/2004 |
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| Beautiful and romantic...Fletcher B |
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| Reviewed by Dale Clark |
7/19/2004 |
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| A beautiful piece, so romantic. |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
7/19/2004 |
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Most beautiful as always Bhuwan!!
Love Tinka |
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| Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader) |
7/19/2004 |
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| So lovely, Bhuwan. |
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| Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger |
7/19/2004 |
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| The raw power of true love and pure poetry mixed together creates timeless treasures such as this, Bhuwan!!!… Excellent work, Poet!!! |
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| Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson |
7/19/2004 |
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| Wonderful words of romance. Enjoy this wonder of being! Behold the beauty of love! |
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| Reviewed by Sandie Angel |
7/19/2004 |
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Hi Bhuwan:
Great to see you here! Wow! this one is sooo fantastically-romantic. Good work indeed!
Sandie May Angel |
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| Reviewed by Amira van Kerk |
7/19/2004 |
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Wonderful poem, expressing the love and feelings for a special person.
Excellent. |
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| Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen |
7/19/2004 |
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| Yikes, Bhuwan, I feel... heat, myself! Beautiful, my friend. :) |
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| Reviewed by Alexandra* OneLight*® Authors & Creations |
7/19/2004 |
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It's good to see you posting again, dear friend. Your poem is a gem of beauty, and so is the love that you sing. But then, so is your heart.
Blessings,
Alexandra* |
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| Reviewed by Carmen Ruggero |
7/19/2004 |
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Lovely work, Bhuwan. Thank you for sharing your talents with us.
Carmen :-) |
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| Reviewed by Safi Abdi |
7/19/2004 |
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Great lines, lovely ambiance. Well done!
Safi
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| Reviewed by Kate Clifford |
7/18/2004 |
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| Great write. |
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| Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader) |
7/18/2004 |
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Bhuwan,
Stopped by seen your post this is so beautiful my friend...
It is one of the most beautiful love poems I have ever read the expressions are so loving and caressing in this gem.... John Donne is sighing" with a soft smile...... I read him this past weekend...
Hugs to the babies and all of you....
Love and always prayers .... and Friendship
you know where to reach me always...
Love Lady Peg |
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| Reviewed by ~Indigo~ Elga |
7/18/2004 |
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Dear Bhuwan
Exceptional poetry ! Beautifully penned, love flows candidly through your words.
Warm hugs
Elga |
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| Reviewed by Dawn Richerson |
7/18/2004 |
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| Bhuwan, nice to read your poems again. I think I will read this one again and again. I can't imagine of a better love poem. Love the last four lines and all the images from nature. Wonderful! Dawn |
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