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| Reviewed by A PAX |
7/29/2004 |
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very erotic!!!
pax A
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oh my! |
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| Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader) |
7/29/2004 |
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| I think that you have delivered the most exquisite few words about kissing that has ever been written. And I mean forever. The reader can just taste the taste you are decribing. This is just . . . good. I'll say it again, no one has ever done said it better. |
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| Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger |
7/29/2004 |
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| Just the right amount of flavor delivered in this delicious treat. Thanks alot Sara, now I need another long shower, and before the end of this HOT day I’ll look like an old prune…lol. Exceptionally well-done, Poet! |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
7/29/2004 |
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a very scrumptious poem!
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| Reviewed by Michael Charles Messineo |
7/29/2004 |
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Sara, Making love is the best dessert. I loved this!!!
...Michael |
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| Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader) |
7/29/2004 |
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| I knew you could do it! Again. |
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| Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers |
7/29/2004 |
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This is spicy Sara! Very well written!
Lisa |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
7/28/2004 |
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Sensual and thought provoking!!
Love Tinka |
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| Reviewed by Rukiya Faizah (Reader) |
7/28/2004 |
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| wow...love the imagery. |
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