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Pain Within ...
by ~Indigo~ Elga
Thursday, July 29, 2004
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~~~To All of You who have left me wonderfu reviews: from the bottom of my heart~~~

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Pain Within�

Anguished cries that you don�t hear,
Pain within and shedding tears.

Silent tears that you don�t see,
Like acid drops my face does sear.

Your heart you�d given so whole and free,
Then you failed, and eluded me.

Ravaged heart and soul of mine,
A broken me you left behind.

Ruptured feelings you set within,
I learnt then, I�d never win.

Tortured me and my mind,
Felt so foolish, so confined.

Crying like a lonely child,
I lashed out and went so wild.

Reaching out I searched for you,
All the more, just made me blue.

Pain within this wounded heart,
You ripped to shreds and tore apart!

� E. Bretton
July 2004 � All Rights Reserved

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Reviewed by Dale Clark	7/31/2004

You express your deep emotions and you've shown us the power of poetry. Brilliant work!




Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner	7/30/2004

(((elga))) pain within and pain without--powerful, heartfelt, emotional write that is deeply rooted in agony--very well written, dear (((friend))) i hope this is fictional, (((HUGS))), anyway :) love, karla. :( i felt this one




Reviewed by Abdi-Noor Mohamed (Eagle Of Hope)	7/30/2004

A very powerful poem. thanks elga




Reviewed by Tinka Boukes	7/30/2004

Very emotive piece Elga!! Warm Drukkies skattie...!! Love Tinka




Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)	7/30/2004

You could still to Pain filled greeting cards.




Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU	7/29/2004

"Pain Within..." sings its painful lines... A poem that drops emotions, and enriches the pages of Poetry. It is a convention that the Panacea for all wounded hearts is LOVE. I salute You, Sublime Poet! Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU




Reviewed by Fletcher Bailey (Reader)	7/29/2004

Elga...this is a very sad poem...when love causes one to betray another loves trust...the world seems to be a very cold place...it is great to see the actual pain that couples, once separated from one another actually feel and go through, in your poetry. Although it is clear that internal pain is quite possibly the most hard to recover from...with time the healing works its magic ever so caringly...You poem is an explosive write of a pain that I am sure all of us at one time or another have come face to face with...this is some of the finest, albeit sad poetry I have ever read...Fletcher B




Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger	7/29/2004

Elga, this soul-gripping heartwrenching write is absolute pure poetry at its finest. Unfortunately it is also a very painful write. Keep that brilliant smile beaming and that magic quill churning out these masterpieces. Thank you for sharing your remarkable talents and timeless artwork, Poet. You know how to reach me, and I�ll act the fool to keep you laughing your buns off my friend.




Reviewed by jude forese	7/29/2004

your pain is deep, your poetry superb ...




Reviewed by E T Waldron	7/29/2004

I feel torn to shreds just reading it Elga! An excruciating poem of heartache I can relate to. Beautifully written! Love the art too!((((hugs)))))




Reviewed by George Carroll	7/29/2004

Painful write




Reviewed by Peter Paton	7/29/2004

Occh..This one really hurts Elga A torturous and agonizing rendition Peter Paton