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Bliss by Marilyn Seray Thursday, August 05, 2004 Rated "G" by the Author. Share Print Save Become a Fan I took this through 15 feet of water. I think the thing on the right is the rubberband around my wrist...maybe Oops, too big, gotta fix it

Pipes above the ground so the water is a little warmer than room temperature One faucet- You want cold, add ice You want hot, boil Sea water- Desalinated, distilled- Voila! The best tasting water, better than bottled- Everything drinkable tastes better Flat-topped Divi tree blowing in one direction from the perpetual trade winds that blow Cactus growing wild and tall just like in the western movies The sea�child of the moon and its bobbing waves that don�t break covers a floor of the purest white sand A starfish eats its meal then stretches. and curls its tips and lazily moves along with a full belly not even disturbing the powdery dust � MS 8.1.04

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Reviewed by Lori Moore	9/11/2004

Nice write, Marilyn. You have crafted some interesting images. I'm an ocean fanatic and love the picture...




Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK	8/7/2004

Unique N Differently Done Good! TRASK




Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie	8/7/2004

Absolutely beautiful poetry, loved that picture, Reindeer




Reviewed by William Bonilla	8/6/2004

beautiful imagery a lovely piece William




Reviewed by Kate Clifford	8/6/2004

I have always liked the starfish and this is a lovely poem.




Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)	8/6/2004

If you pull a starfish's leg off it grows another. Stunning poetry..




Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado	8/6/2004

terrific poem and pic, marilyn! well done on both; enjoyed~ (((HUGS))) and much love, your (sick) tx. friend, karen lynn. :) (i have a nasty sinus infection; feel like you know what! UGGGHGHHHH!!)




Reviewed by Sue Hess	8/6/2004

great poem and photo...the sea is a mystery to me and always draws me




Reviewed by Susan de Vegter	8/6/2004

I remember holding a starfish as it gently crawled across my palm and wrist. It's like nature's magic! I am always awed by the mystery. Your poetry is beautiful and nature must've picked you to describe her so beautifully. Susan




Reviewed by Mr. Ed	8/6/2004

The sea�child of the moon and its bobbing waves that don�t break covers a floor of the purest white sand Wonderful poem and pic, Marilyn; don't think you even need to fix it.




Reviewed by Tinka Boukes	8/6/2004

Excellent thought provoking write Marilyn... Love Tinka




Reviewed by Marilyn Seray	8/5/2004

I'm baffled by the size and can't fix it. any suggestions?




Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)	8/5/2004

This is cool I love the art too Marylin..... Passing by tyding up my den once more... miss ya too. LP




Reviewed by E T Waldron	8/5/2004

Marilyn this is cool. The photo is wonderful a great close-up ,it reminds me of the star christmas cookies I bake for the holidays;-) Sounds like you had a wonderful trip. I'm happy for you. Thanks for sharing this with us!