|Reviewed by Fr. Kurt Messick
|much more than two minutes here!|
|Reviewed by Ronald Hull
|Soft nd sweet, like the morning mist.|
|Reviewed by Safi Abdi
|A 2 minute poem? Excellent!
|Reviewed by Kate Burnside
|This may be a sudden flash of poetic inspiration delivered on the wings of a muse of prayer, but it will endure for a lifetime - not just the whole two minutes! I love the exhilaration in this, but also the subtle, almost misty autumnal flavours too as you weave past, present and future. There is a golden thread to this write which is what makes it timeless. And you use some beautifully evocative imagery and expression here, too: "The likeness of yesterday, the dejavu of bliss". This is a mature, miniature masterpiece... very well done, TY Kate xx|
|Reviewed by Jane Rodway
|Thank you for this poem. You have it all in this poem- unforced rhyming, great, unique descriptions, a good flow and though much is said, it is all worth saying, if you know what I mean. This is a poem that shows much skill in the art of writing poetry.|
|Reviewed by Marilyn Seray
|Beautiful imagery, and 2 minute poem!|
|Reviewed by Vesna Blueflame
|Well written Susan..rather unusual..that's what I like about it..really enjoyed..TY!
|Reviewed by George MacLean Akurunwa
|Deeply moving and powerful. Thanks.|
|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
|What the hell can I say that has not been said? Stunning? Yep. Beautiful? Yep. Lovely . . . Gentle? Yep. Emotive? Yep. Oh. I know. I can say that I love that you saw fit to start your poem off with, "shines through grays." If that phrase doesn't mean what I think it meant, sorry.
|Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz (Reader)
|Susan...you made me long for the Smokies when I read this.
Your images are gorgeously striking! To me, a lover of the
southern misty mornings, they brought back happy memories.
Those "rusted tears," can be polished away with the cleansing
of a real love...but you already know that, don't you?
|Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger
|Susan, this is stunning work. A very well-written enjoyable composition my friend. One must sometimes unfortunately, shed some rusty tears and make way for better days ahead.|
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Beautiful emotive piece Susan!!
|Reviewed by Peter Paton
|So lovely and gentle Susan...
|Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
|This was so lovely Susan, beautiful imagery, I loved this poem so much,
|Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
|Love that "rusted tears" that is a something.|
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|Misty mornings can be marvelous - as is this poem.|
|Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
|So beautiful and emotive. I love your work, Susan.|