|Reviewed by Virago DeSante
I love this poem. It so accurately depicts the emotion and eventual resignation involved in such a situation.
|Reviewed by Tami Ryan
|Oh, great finish, Dawn!|
|Reviewed by Kate Clifford
|Sad but beautifully written.|
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Such fervent hope even in the face of fear, your faith
is strong Dawn! Many people are alone even with someone
which I find even worse! Excellent heartfelt write!
|Reviewed by jude forese
|when we accept that we are alone is when we can move on ... when hope is hopeless it is only our inner strength that keeps us vital and focused ...
a very coherent perspective in this poem ...
|Reviewed by Beth Elaine
|You have learned and share an important truth--the one who cheats can't blame it on the wronged party. However, the wronged lover still suffers immensely. Prayer is sometimes the only recourse. WEll-penned work.|
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
ouch. felt this one--multi-layered, multi-emotional--complex write, but excellently so
(((HUGS))) and love, karla.
the verse that reached deep and gave my soul a twist was
from your "awful reality"
which includes me
unsatisfactory..." *tears tears tears*
|Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz
|I well know the pain you so beautifully depicted here
in this finely crafted poem!
Hope things improve for you, and soon.
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Very well penned Dawn!!
|Reviewed by George MacLean Akurunwa
|Prayer does a lot of miracle. Encouraging thing to do. Thanks.|
|Reviewed by Lori Moore
|Nice form and content. Very creative.|
|Reviewed by The Smoking Poet
|You've captured in poetry something of all relationships... that we must stay apart in those things that are not ours to control, even while we lean in close to share what we have to give. Wishing you serenity.