|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
powerful and emotive, this write sears the soul--well done!
(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :(
|Reviewed by Theresa Koch
|Powerful and heart touching piece`*|
|Reviewed by Kate Clifford
|Gut touching write!|
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|VEry powerful piece Dawn!!
|Reviewed by Phillip William Allen
|A great depiction of a fiurehead, not a real father.|
|Reviewed by Kenny Moon
|stoical, stiff upper lip fathers need to put an arm around their sons and daughters, but then, would we have your eloquent poem, Dawn? k|
|Reviewed by Peter Paton
|Significant and important message to all..with an undercurrent of sadness running through the thread...Dawn..
|Reviewed by jude forese
|I need hope
Not rank, half-baked dope.
great image, awesome poem!
|Reviewed by Virago DeSante
|simple, poignant, accurate.
thankyou for the review!
|Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
|WOW now this is powerful Dawn!|
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|How sad that it must be so! Very dynamic verse, well done!|
|Reviewed by Sandie Angel
|Excellent poem with a great message.
Sandie May Angel
|Reviewed by Lori Moore
|Nice rhyme, great message, excellent poem! Enjoyed.|