|Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson
|Your right Ronald, hope and knowledge is what is needed
Thanks for sharing this excellent poem of yours...
|Reviewed by Amira van Kerk
|Isn't that everybody's dream? That all these stupid wars will stop. They bring nothing but harm and pain to all these innocent people.
Excellent, well-penned poem.
|Reviewed by jude forese
|totally agree with your premise yet there are many soldiers today who are not fighting from a distance, in fact they're way too close ...
excellent poem ... good luck on the book ...
|Reviewed by Lori Moore
|Nice write, Ron. I think most people want peace. The problem is, some have conditions that cannot be lived with... on either side. Enjoyed.|
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
strong sentiments, strong poem--i pray it comes true in our lifetime
(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :(
|Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers
|Ronald, your hopes for peace are the same within us all, only being able to make them true is beyond any realm we could possibly reach. It's a beautiful poem with lots of heart behind it.
|Reviewed by Sara Coslett
|Ronald, a great poem and wonderful thoughts. Unfortunately, the world isn't there yet. You see, while everyone is screaming about weapons of mass destruction, simpler weapons, like machettes are butchering 100's of thousands of people across Africa and Asia. I fear that the only way to end all war (or man killing man) is for an enormous number of people to die. It hurts to even say that, but I fear it is the only way. Otherwise, they will just keep killing each other. ~ Sara|
|Reviewed by Kate Clifford
|If more of us dream like you the positive will override the negative and balance everything out. Thank you for this incredible write.|
|Reviewed by Janet Parker
|This is a good poem. Nice cadence to it. I have to agree with Ed. There will never be peace in this lifetime.|
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Very well penned and time perfect!!
Yes the cycle must end!!
Thanks for sharing dear One!!
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Superb poem Ronald! One of your best! All the best
with your book. I think if we have such terrible division
in our country which this political season shows, then where
is the hope for peace? We can't even be peaceful among ourselves
and we have more than the rest of the world! We are a spoiled
nation. We don't know how to be peaceful, and that unfortunately
goes for all sides of the political spectrum!
|Reviewed by Dawn Richerson
|>>So war became impersonal,
time to break the cycle indeed. great write.
|Reviewed by Ed Matlack
|Fraid' not in this lifetime, Ron, unfortunately! Maybe the next...? Peace is the ONLY way, Ed & 'rufuz|
|Reviewed by Peter Paton
We would all like to see an end to the vicious cycle of war and violence...
Inspirational and humanitarian write...