|Reviewed by jacqueline amos
|Peace be upon your house, these are words of a prophet.|
|Reviewed by Dawn Richerson
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|AbdiNoor, you are a treasure which I hope your people
know about! This is top class poetry once again from you!
|Reviewed by Kate Clifford
|Very creative and intense write!|
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|love the tale you have weaved in this masterful and compelling write! well done! (i agree with the fish, too!)
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in america, karen lynn in texas. :)
continued prayers to you and your nation....and the world, really...
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
not only somalis, but men of all nations can learn a powerful lesson from this uniquely crafted story--BRAVO, dear (((brother)))! and i agree with the fish--
"...they are nice people, very nice people
may be the nicest i have ever seen..." :)
(((HUGS))) and love, and always, continued prayers, karla. :)
|Reviewed by Safi Abdi
|MashaAllah! The sea isn't the only one wondering about our stupidity, Abdi. I hope Somalis are reading this:)
|Reviewed by A PAX
|wow! right there in plain sight! pax A|
|Reviewed by Sandie Angel
|Wonderful poem, especially the last two lines.
Sandie May Angel
|Reviewed by Kay P Devenish
|Wow...this is an awesome poem,I loved reading this one!|
|Reviewed by Lori Moore
|I always enjoy your work. This is an excellent piece.
"If Mother TIME can't teach you a lesson
I canít train you how to catch a Fish"
A wonderful ending!