|Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
|A really lovely poem Ron|
|Reviewed by Peter Paton
|Serene and tranquil , Rod...
Swans are such graceful birds..
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Absolutely beautiful poetry Ronald!!
|Reviewed by Erica Ivory
|If lovers could take a moment to glide upstream,
Their lives would be peaceful like in their dream.
So if you're ever by the shore of Town Lake,
Take a moment for the swans and the depth of their wake.
|Reviewed by jude forese
|i'm trying to think of an extrememly cunning comment, like the ones you do but for now i'll say, well done ...|
|Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson
|A fine poet you are...
Smelling the coffee works too....
|Reviewed by Rebekah Rosie Lang
|Beautiful poem! Exquisite indeed!
|Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
|This was very beautiful Ronald, lovely and so peaceful,
|Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers
|Thank you Ronald, I love to watch swans glide across the water, it's as though they never have to make an effort. So gracious and delicate.
|Reviewed by Lori Moore
|Reviewed by Katy Walsvik
|Thank you, Ronald, for the most peaceful, perhaps even weepy moment in this day. Don't mind me, 'weepy' is a typical response of mine to most things truly beautiful and moving. This is really lovely. katy xox.|
|Reviewed by Janet Parker
|Beautiful, peaceful poem. Excellent rhyming. I enjoyed this very much. Janet|
|Reviewed by Kate Clifford
|Wonderful advice and great write!|
|Reviewed by A PAX
|lovely poem ;)
and true thoughts.......pax A