|Reviewed by F William Broome
|This poem strengthens my belief that focused persons need a shock once and a while - to show them that the world is round, and that there are others coming and going in our lives.
Surely Caroll gave him a second chance to get to know Carla. That's what I want to believe, anyhow. Good writing. _ Bill
|Reviewed by Janet Parker
|Thank all of you for the wonderful comments. I laugh everytime I think about this scenario. I just wanted to explain that Andy Turner is from England and his comment really does mean something, although I'm not quite sure what. It's an "English thing."|
|Reviewed by William Bonilla
|Kool write Janet
|Reviewed by Karen Chalfant (Reader)
|Poor George! I really feel for him. What did Carla do?|
|Reviewed by Joni Stewart-Hague
|hahahahaha...... poor George ! I found this very amusing, except the part about him being an 'inept' surgeon.... sheesh.... what was his last name again ? LOL. Great write !|
|Reviewed by Ronald Hull
|An 'inept' surgeon--scary. But it's a wonderful, funny, story. It could be a limerick, but that's too ribold?
I once bought a match made in heaven. Sadly, it wouldn't light. No saltpeter and brimstone in heaven.
|Reviewed by Pamela Kimmell
|Wow....truth is funnier than a lot of fiction we read huh? Cute poem Janet - especially seeing as how it actually happened!|
|Reviewed by jude forese
|a most humorous scenario!|
|Reviewed by Phillip William Allen
|This was one funny occurance. Wish I was there|
|Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
|Yes Arsenal winning 4-0 was a great result..|
|Reviewed by Reverend Davey (Reader)
|Hello Janet! You are a very professional lady indeed and one to be admired. I loved this poem! Loved the flow and the humour. (It's a joke ME reviewing when I am just learning, isn't it?)
I like the look of your other titles and will definitely come back as soon as I have the time. This looks like a fun site for me.
Blessings Rev Davey
|Reviewed by Lori Moore
|Lol... This is the second time today that you have provided a great laugh! Thanks!|
|Reviewed by Tami Ryan
|This is too funny. Thanks for the laugh. (Poor George.)|
|Reviewed by Kate Clifford
|LOL! Poor guy :-) Thanks for the sharing :-)|