Realms To Come
by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen
Saturday, October 02, 2004
Rated "G" by the Author.
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You realms of heavens heights, your musical
movement of celestial spheres design
awareness of harmony. Held in thrall
in other kingdoms, lives egos combine
amid fields of existence; then collide,
empirical; knowing one day they’ll flee
far past the domain of Man. To reside
in orbits ambits. Principality,
your sphere's reign includes ‘Kingdom Come’. Oblique
in supreme extent, perpetuity
reflects eternal horizons mystique,
right angled by influences decree.
Realms of continuation, by actions
of province, you secure ids extractions.
Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen
© Copyright 10/2/04
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
10/2/2004 |
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| A thought-provoking collection of verses expressed in a beautiful sonnet. Thank you for this offering, Erin. Love and peace. Regis |
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| Reviewed by Kate Clifford |
10/2/2004 |
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| Insightful write :-) |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
10/2/2004 |
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| the psychological metaphysics of this poem is very intriguing .. the domain of man lies beyond his collective unconscious ... |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
10/2/2004 |
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Erin I love your expansion theories! YOu do have
a wondrous affinity for infinity;-)! |
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| Reviewed by Ed Matlack |
10/2/2004 |
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| As usual from you Erin, something I don't understand, but it doesn't mean I don't like it either...maybe it has to be 4:20 for me to get it, but being on the wagon for now, well...Peace, Ed & rufuz |
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| Reviewed by Lori Moore |
10/2/2004 |
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| Very nice! |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
10/2/2004 |
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Awesome Erin!!
Love Tinka |
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| Reviewed by A PAX |
10/2/2004 |
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| excellent........and well done! lol |
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| Reviewed by Katy Walsvik |
10/2/2004 |
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| Erin, I refuse to type "Excellent!" and leave it at that, for it tells you little and insults the process. I got lost here BUT... and this is an important BUT... I happily and sincerely echo the comments left here by Peter Paton. (down there... see him? smile) katy xox. |
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| Reviewed by Peter Paton |
10/2/2004 |
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Yes awesome Erin...
You extend the boundaries of poetry and prose effortlessly...
Dynamic pen..
Peter |
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| Reviewed by Dawn Richerson |
10/2/2004 |
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eternal horizons mystique,
right angled by influences decree.
you never cease to amaze me with thoughts like these. another awesome write, Erin. |
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