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| Reviewed by Katy Walsvik |
10/8/2004 |
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| Whimsey, yes, Ron... and a bit of melancholy, for the ultimate freedom really is that, isn't it? The ability to follow even our most fanciful creations of the mind, to soar with instant grace and answer to no one but ourselves. I was entirely smitten with this gentle musing. One of your sweetest; one of your best! katy xox. |
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| Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader) |
10/4/2004 |
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| I loved it Ron, beautiful, fanciful poem. |
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| Reviewed by Susan Barton (Reader) |
10/4/2004 |
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| just keeping my eyes on the prize |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
10/3/2004 |
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Excellent Ronald!!
Flying side by side does leave you with inner piece deep within...knowing forgiveness are in reach... if only you hold out your hand to God... and he takes it and tells you everything will be okay!!
Thanks for sharing this...it left me with the feeling of "Peace"
Love Tinka |
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| Reviewed by Kate Clifford |
10/3/2004 |
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| I could feel the flight. Great write :-) |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
10/3/2004 |
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| pretty soon we'll be making love in anti-gravity ... |
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| Reviewed by Ed Matlack |
10/3/2004 |
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| I am with you throughout the whole trip, Ron...dreams are sometimes all we got, especially for me, as I hate flying, LOL! Peace bro', Ed & rufuz |
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| Reviewed by Dawn Richerson |
10/3/2004 |
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| good writing |
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| Reviewed by Peter Paton |
10/3/2004 |
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A real flight of fancy Ron...
As smooth as a glider.....
Peter |
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| Reviewed by Evelyn Simon |
10/3/2004 |
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| I'm all whimsey from the flight of your poetic words. :o) |
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| Reviewed by Janet Parker |
10/3/2004 |
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| An interesting and unusual subject. Very good poem. Janet |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
10/3/2004 |
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| Beautifully written Ronald! I watched it and when it started rolling at first I thought oh no please! Deja vu! I was so thankful to see it straighten out and the beautiful landing. So save your money $200,000 what the heck;-) Enjoy!;-) |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
10/3/2004 |
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(((ronald)))
to infinity, and beyond! a most soaring write--well done!
(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :) |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
10/3/2004 |
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Very nicely done, Ronald; thanks for sharing!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D |
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