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2.	A Snigglet of Truth


3.	Make Your Choice


4.	UNHEARD LOGIC


5.	My Heart


6.	POVERTY'S BEAUTY


7.	Determination


8.	Childish?


9.	Self Forgiveness


10.	Life's Script


11.	Dare I?


12.	Before You Speak


13.	Normalcy does not exist…


14.	If The Good Die Young


15.	Live without pretending, love without depe

Unsure by Ed Matlack Monday, October 04, 2004 Rated "G" by the Author. Share Print Save Become a Fan
UNSURE… Unsure today as to my direction, Know do I where I have been, Not sure where I do be heading, Am I being redundant or do I repeat? My last poem was very much the same, More questions herein for the self seem lame…? Hopefully my direction will not falter, North, south, east, west, my direction does not alter, My feelings that I have today made me feel depressed, I hold them in for the most part, yes I do repress, Not good for the soul or mind to do so, But sometimes I just sit here and worry myself into a frazzle, Knowing today my life will not be much of a dazzle… If I do not work, perhaps a drive to the sea is in order, Maybe there at the oceans edge I can remedy my internal disorder, Wish I could; wish I might, become with the ocean a permanent boarder… © ed ~ 10/4/04

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Reviewed by Rene Swing	10/6/2004

Yes you need to talk to her...She is always there to listen to you. You always feel better when you talk to her. Just feel the stiff breeze on your face, listen to the waves breaking on the shore, walk on the sand (better not take off ur shoes...lol), sit on the sand & pour out ur heart to her....Then take Rufus for a walk or throw a ball, go & visit with Lien. What a wonderful day to be alive! Just remember: My love is always with you too, so you are never alone! Ilove you....Rene' xxoo




Reviewed by Tinka Boukes	10/4/2004

"Wish I could; wish I might, become with the ocean a permanent boarder…??? Been there and wish to be one with the ocean right this moment...i am losing the battle!! Love Tinka




Reviewed by Daniel McTaggart	10/4/2004

When I was in the Florida Keys, I would stand at the edge of the surf until the incoming waves buried my feet in the sand. Very peaceful. I always go back to that memory when I really need to relax.




Reviewed by Susan Barton (Reader)	10/4/2004

go through some starfish in the sea, breath in salt air, get back to your roots. Love and prayers




Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner	10/4/2004

(((ed))) so sad, your last couple of writes (((HUGS))) go talk to the ocean; she's always ready to listen. play a game with catch with rufuz; you'll both enjoy it :) (((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)