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| Reviewed by jacqueline amos |
10/31/2005 |
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This poem gives a aesthetic effect and appeal beyond mere technical proficiency, I love your form, and the style as well as the subject matter, I love the effective use of your phrase;
She tries with maximum effort; Yet nothing seems to go right
Intelligence and persistence;
Are just not enough the system and people
Just make it too tough.
The command of form and your cohesiveness keeps your readers attention, continue the good work.
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| Reviewed by Anne Brooks |
3/21/2005 |
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| Nice rhymes.The poem is touching because you wrote it for someone close to you.The writing is sincere and depicts what women have to do to survive.anne Pawlak. |
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| Reviewed by Sue Hess |
10/5/2004 |
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| just be there...sometimes it is all that is needed |
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| Reviewed by Kate Clifford |
10/4/2004 |
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| This is a beautiful heart touching write that you have done. |
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| Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen |
10/4/2004 |
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| Thankfully, "this too will pass" ever endures. Nicely expressed message. |
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| Reviewed by Danielle Mundy |
10/4/2004 |
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| I'm crying right now. I love you too. |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
10/4/2004 |
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I'm thankful she has you to care and encourage her. It's true
if she could only know that things won't always be this way.
They can change for the better. I pray they will! |
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