|Reviewed by jacqueline amos
|This poem gives a aesthetic effect and appeal beyond mere technical proficiency, I love your form, and the style as well as the subject matter, I love the effective use of your phrase;
She tries with maximum effort; Yet nothing seems to go right
Intelligence and persistence;
Are just not enough the system and people
Just make it too tough.
The command of form and your cohesiveness keeps your readers attention, continue the good work.
|Reviewed by Anne Brooks
|Nice rhymes.The poem is touching because you wrote it for someone close to you.The writing is sincere and depicts what women have to do to survive.anne Pawlak.|
|Reviewed by Sue Hess
|just be there...sometimes it is all that is needed|
|Reviewed by Kate Clifford
|This is a beautiful heart touching write that you have done.|
|Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen
|Thankfully, "this too will pass" ever endures. Nicely expressed message.|
|Reviewed by Danielle Mundy
|I'm crying right now. I love you too.|
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|I'm thankful she has you to care and encourage her. It's true
if she could only know that things won't always be this way.
They can change for the better. I pray they will!