|Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain
A deeply emotive, powerful write, as only you can deliver with such excellence ... superb!!
Best to you,
|Reviewed by Dale Clark
|It's the way of love Tinka. Who knows the whys?
|Reviewed by Kate Clifford
|It's hard when you love someone and you know it will never be. Great write.|
|Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz (Reader)
|One of your finest, Tinka girl...and the line about
"one foot on a banana peel, the other in my mouth," is
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|Although you say not, this is a happy tune playing, and a marvelous picture and post, by a marvelous caring person. Write, Sing, and Slip On!|
|Reviewed by Paul Berube
Sad and beautiful write. Love the picture.
|Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
|Which ones the bird Tinks.|
|Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
|Don't feed the rodents.|
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|I love that pic of you! Great write Tinka,;-)and music to match!
|Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen
|Nice one, Tinka. Perfect verse for the tune! Wonderful artistry.|
|Reviewed by Susan Barton (Reader)
|life can be hazardous!|
|Reviewed by Sara Coslett
|That's because you used to be a gymnist. How else could you have one foot in your mouth, while slipping on a banana? Do you remember what your coach used to say to you when you fell? That still applies. ~ Sara
P.S. - Good poem...lol.
|Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson
|Anything is possible
Hi Tinka, thanks so much for commenting on me daughters post
She is excited with all the comments.
Love ya!love the picture of you there.........
|Reviewed by Ed Matlack
|You can't "be" with that bird, its called beastiality...Ed|
|Reviewed by A PAX
|i agree with elga!
trust me :)
|Reviewed by Peter Paton
|A touch sad and downcast in this lovely poem...
Better days will come...and the sun will rise again in the morning Tinka...
|Reviewed by ~Indigo~ Elga
NEVER say never, everything can be if you are just positive and work towards a goal. Don't let insignificant little issues break you down. Be positive and make it REAL....
|Reviewed by Phillip William Allen
|This picture proves your guts. No way would I sit beneath a Gull|
|Reviewed by George Carroll
|Lost love, and the heartaches it brings.|
|Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
|Different- Stop Thinking So Much,Go Into SILENCE Start Listening To That(Your) inner Voce Within,i.e. Be Surprised What You Will Hear_
All You Need To Add Write At End Of Your Poem IS:
c 2004 Tinka Boukes
|Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
|This one is a strong voice Tinka, full of emotion.|