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Unable to Resist You !
by ~Indigo~ Elga

Sunday, October 10, 2004
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Unable to Resist You !

 

In your calming manner,
you taught me,
how not to lose my temper,
how to control my anger,
I learnt !
Often this anger would surge within
you spoke gently and calmed me,
my temper so often was bound to rage,
that too,
again with your understanding, you eased.
I have become a lot more controlled
a nicer person to be around,
it has been because of you.
But one sad fact still remains,
and that is,
you cannot teach me how to,
control my hurt !
I just need for you to realise,
it's not the big things in life that hurt,
they are but the small ones !
those are the ones that really cut the deepest,
that tear out the heart,
rip me apart,
expose me to so much pain,
you may never understand,
when you merely shut me out !
The feelings are totally overwhelming,
I feel so lost and alone,
so rejected and confused,
used and abused,
and yet, with a snap of your fingers,
I am unable to resist you,
even though the pain and hurt
lay so deep within,
I open my arms,
and let you in again !

 

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October 2004 - all rights reserved

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Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner 10/13/2004
(((elga)))

heartbreaking write--so true for so many--thank you for baring your soul today for the world to see. if this has happened to you, i'm so sorry. if not, you've convinced the reader that you have been there. many of your readers will sense it, too. BRAVA!

(((HUGS))) and love, karla dorman, lady of the Lights :(
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader) 10/13/2004
Oh some understand, exactly what these silent tactics do to the heart of one who loves them. This poem is real and raw and its subject matter made me angry.
Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger 10/12/2004
Elga, far too often it is the little things, which rip apart a humanís heart and soul! Your undeniable magnificent poetry, clearly illustrates this my friend. An excellent well-penned and beautifully presented composition. Thank you for sharing it. Take care and be well.
Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya 10/12/2004
Dear Elga....as always you have touched my heart with this wonderful write....this is like a song...superb flow my friend...I especially liked these wonderful lines.

I am unable to resist you,
even though the pain and hurt
lay so deep within,
I open my arms,
and let you in again !

Cheers....love n luck....BHUWAN!!!!
Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz (Reader) 10/11/2004
Reminds me of the old pop song (that I still love):
"Little Things Mean a Lot"
Much meaning, indeed, in this piece, Elga!
Reviewed by Lori Moore 10/11/2004
Touching write.
Reviewed by Susan Barton (Reader) 10/11/2004
you cannot teach me how to,
control my hurt !

not easy making like a duck - but it's a choice
Reviewed by Dale Clark 10/11/2004
It's the little things that make the world
go around. Very heartfelt!
Reviewed by Handsum Hart 10/11/2004
wow, this is really heartfelt
splendid work Elga

peace
Reviewed by Mr. Ed 10/11/2004
it's not the big things in life that hurt,
they are but the small ones !

How ironically true, Elga; just as small things can often bring the biggest pleasure. Life, truly, is thought provoking, as is this poem.
Reviewed by A PAX 10/11/2004
love is a rough sea!
maybe its time for your friend to change......
since you already made the effort???
pax.......A
good luck!
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 10/11/2004
Powerful piece Elga!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by jude forese 10/10/2004
emotively powerful, well written poem ... when the reasoning is unclear its always best to ask ...
Reviewed by E T Waldron 10/10/2004
wow, I thought for a minute I wrote this, sounds so familiar!;-)
Fantastic the way you capture the offense Elga. Beautifully done!
Rejection, being shut out,or ignored, is right up there with all
the other ways of abuse.
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader) 10/10/2004
Yup hear it all the time..lol
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