|Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg
|nice...love the swirl ending|
|Reviewed by L. Figgins
|Incredible write! Saved...|
|Reviewed by Martin Hebert
|Reviewed by Joyce Hale
|Striking write, Silvia!! The use of #s and short lines accentuates your tale. I loved it.
|Reviewed by Rebekah Rosie Lang
|Oh Wow Slyvia! This is so magical!
And I love the picture too! Honest I
did not know you were doing this.
As you see on my poem, I wrote it on Microsoft Word and
finished it at 7:47pm Central Daylight time. Guess it was
just co-incidence! (spelling?) Thanks for the review! I love the titles of your work, thus far and have read just the beginnings of some, and so I am thus starting to track you! The pleasure is all mine!
When I get to Gold-Status again, and can find a library with pictures on disk or CD, I will start to put up pictures with my poems!
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Superb mystical mood in this gem! Wonderful progression!|
|Reviewed by Kate Clifford
|Powerful imagery and use of numbers. GREAT write.|
|Reviewed by Dawn Richerson
|I've only just "discovered" your work here and I'm in awe. This was an awesome spiritual write. Dawn|