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| Reviewed by M.Bennett Hooper (Mikii) |
10/21/2004 |
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| My dearest Abdi-Noor, we have an old "Negro" spiritual whose lyrics stated by Moses read, "Go down Pharoah, let my people go". It seems that Pharoah never dies. I join you in screaming to the wind to let my people go. You are in my prayers Brother as I recall the African knowledge of God before Jesus or Mohammed. Stay strong my brother, we too want you to live again and again. TRUTH NEVER DIES BUT IT WOUNDS CAN BE FATAL! |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
10/18/2004 |
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(((abdi-noor)))
chilling write that literally brought a gasp of terror to my lips--the reader senses the danger your people and you are in
please stay safe, dear brother--you are in my prayers
(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :( |
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| Reviewed by Dawn Richerson |
10/18/2004 |
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| pointed and gripping, Abdi-Noor |
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| Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie |
10/18/2004 |
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Very deep and heart-wrenching poetry, powerful.
Reindeer |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
10/18/2004 |
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You break my heart with this one Abdi Noor!
God do you no longer open eyes
There are ears stuffed with such lies
Without you, how do we reach
The lawless minds that so breach
Justice, what is sensible,and true
There cannot be any fairness
If your light is kept hidden by darkness
To whom shall we cry for mercy
For nations that live in fear of warlords
Instead of learning to fear you Lord
Can we help Abdi Noor and his family find a way
Until his nation turns to peace one day!
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
10/18/2004 |
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When blindness rules
Seeing is a crime
Quite profound, Abdi-Noor, and sadfully true in many areas of our world today. I hope many will see your heartfelt write. |
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