|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Intruiging write Dawn!!
|Reviewed by Carmen Ruggero
|You say much in just a few lines. I like the way you've formatted this poem, and the way you let the focus go from one to the other. I liked this very much.
|Reviewed by Kate Clifford
|Enjoyed the thought wave flowing through this.|
|Reviewed by jude forese
|you think there may be more to us
than either of us knows.
Youíd like the chance to show me
and say you donít remember me
from sometime long ago
i really like these lines ... they flow so well as say so much ....
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Very intruiging Dawn! I like the way did this one.
You are very creative!