Some Chance for My Soul? (poem) by Dawn Richerson on AuthorsDen

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Some Chance for My Soul? by Dawn Richerson Wednesday, October 20, 2004 Rated "G" by the Author. Share Print Save Become a Fan
I’d like to get to know you because I think there may be more to us than either of us knows. I’d like the chance to show you my soul and see if you remember me from sometime long ago. But I don’t, ’cause I can’t. You’d like to just avoid me because you think there may be more to us than either of us knows. You’d like the chance to show me my soul and say you don’t remember me from sometime long ago. But you can’t, so you don’t.

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Reviewed by Tinka Boukes	10/20/2004

Intruiging write Dawn!! Love Tinka




Reviewed by Carmen Ruggero	10/20/2004

You say much in just a few lines. I like the way you've formatted this poem, and the way you let the focus go from one to the other. I liked this very much. Carmen :-)




Reviewed by Kate Clifford	10/20/2004

Enjoyed the thought wave flowing through this.




Reviewed by jude forese	10/20/2004

you think there may be more to us than either of us knows. You’d like the chance to show me my soul and say you don’t remember me from sometime long ago i really like these lines ... they flow so well as say so much ....




Reviewed by E T Waldron	10/20/2004

Very intruiging Dawn! I like the way did this one. You are very creative!