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small mistakes by Steve Patterson Thursday, October 21, 2004 Rated "G" by the Author. Share Print Save Become a Fan small mistakes there are no re-takes no do-overs no four-leave-clovers
no going back to do agin' no way to -re-track Today is where i begin my small mistakes like snow flakes fall from the sky and though i try they melt each mistake is felt one small mistake like a tear drop from my eye makes me stop and ponder "why?" "why?" are there no re-takes for my small mistakes and then i cry

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Reviewed by Ed Matlack	10/21/2004

Crying won't change the mistake in this life, but it might help in the next...Jersey and Howlin'




Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie	10/21/2004

Yeah, this one hits hard and right to the bone. Excellent Steve, Reindeer




Reviewed by Lori Moore	10/21/2004

The size of a mistake is always qualified by it consequence. Well, you did place this is the Philosophy category.




Reviewed by Sue Hess	10/21/2004

sad steve but unfortunately true