by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
Friday, October 22, 2004
Rated "G" by the Author.
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Ghostly fingers scrape your spines,
My pet spiders walk down your face,
Gobbly moans and witchly whines,
Eminate as you tour my place,
Bubble, bubble, toil, trouble,
Come sample a bit of my brew,
GIT BACK HERE, ON THE DOUBLE!!!!
I made it 'specially for you,
Neck strangled by gnarly hands,
Feet frozen to the floor in fear,
Eyes popped out like rubber bands,
And your hair's sticking out to HERE--
Crrrrreepy laughter, just for you,
And a surprise behind the door,
Mayhaps a spell, mayhap two,
What are you doing on the floor?
You don't look like you feel well,
Don't look like you feel good at ALL,
The truth is, you look like hell,
HAPPY HALLOWEEN TO YOU ALL!!
(C) Copy written, 22 October 2004, by Karla Dorman.
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|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|nice write, karla; you are sure getting creative in your writing! BRAVA on a job well done!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, karen lynn. :D
|Reviewed by Ed Matlack
|BOO to you TOO...Ed|
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|My pet spiders walk down your face,
Now you're talkin! Can I borrow some of them?!
|Reviewed by Lori Moore
|Very creative! I love the ending.|
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Colorful write Karla!!
Happy hallow to you too!!
|Reviewed by Kate Clifford
|Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen
|I have to agree I love the affect too...
|Reviewed by Leland Waldrip
|Happy 'ween, Karla. Great write to put me in the mood -- for the holidays, of course! Best regards,
|Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)
|I really liked the colors you added to the poem it gave it a special effect. Nice write. Judy|
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Wow! That form looks like the Frankenstein Monster! Great work Karla,
Excellent poem too!;-)May the weens be nice to you this year!;-)
|Reviewed by Jack Roberts
|Well, I wont sleep tonight now lol Good one Karla! : )