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Save A Life
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
Wednesday, October 27, 2004
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Too many find themselves in this situation. If this describes you, GET OUT while you still can.

Stop living a lie!
Rise above the fists of fear!
It's all up to you!

(C) Copy written, 27, 2004, by Karla Dorman.

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Reviewed by Kate Burnside 10/29/2004
SUCH POWER AND WISDOM that it packs a very special punch, Karla! You are really very good at this!!!!!! Many will hear your resounding words of truth and warning, but perhaps will not have the courage to follow through... however, the more your words are RECEIVED, the more lives will be changed for the good... Thank you for your "cut to the chase" message and for your concern for those who suffer. Bless you. LOL Kate xx
Reviewed by M.Bennett Hooper (Mikii) 10/29/2004
Karla, Karla, you always pack a wallop gyrlfren. Power thy name is Karla. <HUGS> your friend Mikii
Reviewed by Tracey L. O' Very (Reader) 10/29/2004
Great Message!!!! and photo totally brings the reality of,-- this could be you.
God Bless You.
Reviewed by Phillip William Allen 10/28/2004
Words to heed
Reviewed by Cynthia Castle (Reader) 10/28/2004

Well said! Brilliant Haiku! Powerful advice and so true! Love the graphic also!


Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz (Reader) 10/28/2004
Stunning graphic and message!
Reviewed by Kate Clifford 10/28/2004
Great message!
Reviewed by Dale Clark 10/28/2004
Very powerful and sage advice.
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader) 10/28/2004
Powerful write, Karla, wise advice.
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 10/28/2004
Powerful message Karla!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by Mr. Ed 10/28/2004
A most powerful message and 'Ku, Karla.
Reviewed by Rebekah Rosie Lang 10/28/2004
Spread the Word, Yes!
We all need to try and Stop the violence!
Excellent Haiku Karla!
Love ya!
Reviewed by jude forese 10/27/2004
before you lying in the chalk ... much needed message ...
Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen 10/27/2004
Karla this is excellent
God Bless
Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK 10/27/2004


Your Friend,TRASK
Reviewed by E T Waldron 10/27/2004
Superb Ku Karla! This is outstanding in its short dynamic effect!
a one two punch no pun intended;-)
Reviewed by Dave Harm 10/27/2004
"It's all up to you!" How true!!!
Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain 10/27/2004

This starts off with a fine image that builds into a powerfully delivered, succinct message - brillant my friend!!

Reviewed by Sherry Heim 10/27/2004
An excellent and powerful message, Karla. The ability to change our lives must come from our own strength and realization of self worth.
Take care,
Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader) 10/27/2004
What women have to understand the moment they say no more and get away from the man who is not going to change they take control of their lives back. Keep the message going.
Reviewed by Karen Chalfant (Reader) 10/27/2004
Good message, Karla. People in such situations often wait too long. They need a lot of encouragement and support. Great work!
Reviewed by Dawn Richerson 10/27/2004
wonderful use of haiku form, excellent message of empowerment to those entrapped in such situations
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado 10/27/2004

Good advice! Thanks; you may have saved some lives today! Well done; brava! Powerful write in so few words; small, yes, but packs a giant-sized wallop!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :( >tears <
Reviewed by A PAX 10/27/2004
absolutely right!!!

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