|Reviewed by Sanil nath (Reader)
|This is excellent Grim Sisters ...
I love the work posted in your name...
|Reviewed by Simon Thurlow (Reader)
|Oooh...dark indeed. Made the hairs on my neck stand up (and that takes some doing believe me !!)|
|Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green
|Eery! Brrrr. You did too good a job! Fraidypants <3|
|Reviewed by Vesna Blueflame
|Wow!! Well done Retta!!! Spooked me alright..lOL!!!
|Reviewed by Franz Kessler
|Dark and very intense write. Franz|
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
a nightmare visited--a wrathful God who enjoys watching us scuttle on broken appendages, who could squash us like the cockroaches we are....JAYSUS you've got me doing it now...dark, depressing...chillingly and effectively written
HOWEVER: the God i serve is not like that. he gets angry, but it is ME who fails HIM, not the other way around...he is merciful and just to answer my prayers as His will dictates. is it in my best interest? if not, okay, then, maybe next time. :)
thank you--one of your best...LOVE IT--a keeper *thanks*
((((HUGS))) and love, karla.
|Reviewed by Lynn Barry
|deliciously chilling and good...|
|Reviewed by jude forese
|your depth is unique and cunning in this poem ...|
|Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
|Wild N Off The Wall Done Good!
|Reviewed by Rebekah Rosie Lang
|Dark and Spooky write.
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|Chillingly haunting. Well done, Reindeer. Love and peace. Regis|
|Reviewed by Sandie Angel
|We all get pathetic at one time or another. Good write of a dark piece.
Sandie May Angel :o)
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Haunting write Retta!!
|Reviewed by Handsum Hart
|A spine chilling piece, well written!
Peace and happiness
|Reviewed by Kate Clifford
|Yikes! This is one of the best dark writes I have read in a long time. Your very good at this type of writing.|
|Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster
|Quite the write. Most enjoyed. Thanks for comment on website. Keep well, added you to tracker..Catch you soon. Trish.|
|Reviewed by Peter Paton
|Dark and sombre write Retta...
You accentuate the garish and gruesome side so well...
|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
|Well, this blasted me back into another world and kept me there until I finished this macabre bit of poetry. I am okay now, just wondering if I, too, am serving a dead God. Fantastic! You lit up the sky with this one.|
|Reviewed by Dale Clark
|Wow! Very haunting.|
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|Again, I must say, you Grim Sisters do Dark Supurbly!|
|Reviewed by George Carroll
|A ghoulish reminder of the dead all around us.|
|Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
|Very effective Retta, thought provoking and spine tingling.|
|Reviewed by F William Broome
|Good words - laid out in a great piece of writing. It's the most effective and penetrating sermon I've heard. You surely answered some of my lamentations - but I have only a few at this pointin time. Another Goodun; ! ! ! - Bill|
|Reviewed by Chanti Niven
|Retta, What frightens me is where this comes from ;-) This is a bone chilling read. Well done!
|Reviewed by Mary Quire
|Late or not, it's terrifying.
|Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
|Sisters Grim..lololol...What can one say, it's not dark, it's black..|
|Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger
|Reindeer, this poetic well-penned treat clearly illustrates the final destination and results for those who have chosen to serve a “Dead God!” Excellent work, my friend. I loved it! Thanks for sharing your work. Take good care and be well.|
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Reindeer this is fantastic dark as the abyss and scarier than any halloween;-)! Nobody does this better Great duet!|