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*Another offering from The Grim Sisters, a little late for halloween, but...By Sister Wolf and Reindeer

You frail creatures are nothing to me
But maybe soon to be
A part of this past
Walk with me
Down the catacomb walls
As I lead you to my master

And you scream
As you see visions of what will be,
Of what has been,
Your vile existence lies before you,
In empty dreams and cold reality…

What is this reality
Passed down to me
Through generations
Of people filled with fragility
Give me my grave
On a rainy day
So i can lay

There to sink in your sweet misery,
Cover myself with the stink of your fear,
Wallow in the misery of your life,
And know in your heart your fate!
Your pleadings mean nothing to me,
Your fear sweet music to my ears!

you pathetic creatures
That crawl to me
And bow down on your knees
Pleading "oh help me please"
As if I would even help bandage you
While you bleed

Breathe into me, your last bit of life
Let me suck on those sour lips
Sour, just like your heart
Wicked foolish soul,
Now you shall bleed into me
As I desolve all your useless energy
What's the point in being alive,
If you're going to serve a dead God...

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Reviewed by Sanil nath (Reader) 11/13/2004
This is excellent Grim Sisters ...

I love the work posted in your name...

Reviewed by Simon Thurlow (Reader) 11/13/2004
Oooh...dark indeed. Made the hairs on my neck stand up (and that takes some doing believe me !!)
Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green 11/12/2004
Eery! Brrrr. You did too good a job! Fraidypants <3
Reviewed by Vesna Blueflame 11/12/2004
Wow!! Well done Retta!!! Spooked me alright..lOL!!!

Vesna :)
Reviewed by Franz Kessler 11/8/2004
Dark and very intense write. Franz
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado 11/8/2004
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner 11/8/2004

a nightmare visited--a wrathful God who enjoys watching us scuttle on broken appendages, who could squash us like the cockroaches we are....JAYSUS you've got me doing it now...dark, depressing...chillingly and effectively written

HOWEVER: the God i serve is not like that. he gets angry, but it is ME who fails HIM, not the other way around...he is merciful and just to answer my prayers as His will dictates. is it in my best interest? if not, okay, then, maybe next time. :)

thank you--one of your best...LOVE IT--a keeper *thanks*

((((HUGS))) and love, karla.
Reviewed by Lynn Barry 11/8/2004
deliciously chilling and good...
Reviewed by jude forese 11/7/2004
your depth is unique and cunning in this poem ...
Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK 11/7/2004
Wild N Off The Wall Done Good!

Reviewed by Rebekah Rosie Lang 11/7/2004
Dark and Spooky write.
Reviewed by Regis Auffray 11/7/2004
Chillingly haunting. Well done, Reindeer. Love and peace. Regis
Reviewed by Sandie Angel 11/7/2004
We all get pathetic at one time or another. Good write of a dark piece.

Sandie May Angel :o)
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 11/7/2004
Haunting write Retta!!

love Tinka
Reviewed by Handsum Hart 11/7/2004
A spine chilling piece, well written!

Peace and happiness
Reviewed by Kate Clifford 11/7/2004
Yikes! This is one of the best dark writes I have read in a long time. Your very good at this type of writing.
Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster 11/7/2004
Quite the write. Most enjoyed. Thanks for comment on website. Keep well, added you to tracker..Catch you soon. Trish.
Reviewed by Peter Paton 11/7/2004
Dark and sombre write Retta...
You accentuate the garish and gruesome side so well...
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader) 11/7/2004
Well, this blasted me back into another world and kept me there until I finished this macabre bit of poetry. I am okay now, just wondering if I, too, am serving a dead God. Fantastic! You lit up the sky with this one.
Reviewed by Dale Clark 11/7/2004
Wow! Very haunting.
Reviewed by Mr. Ed 11/7/2004
Again, I must say, you Grim Sisters do Dark Supurbly!
Reviewed by George Carroll 11/7/2004
A ghoulish reminder of the dead all around us.
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader) 11/7/2004
Very effective Retta, thought provoking and spine tingling.
Reviewed by F William Broome 11/7/2004
Good words - laid out in a great piece of writing. It's the most effective and penetrating sermon I've heard. You surely answered some of my lamentations - but I have only a few at this pointin time. Another Goodun; ! ! ! - Bill
Reviewed by Chanti Niven 11/7/2004
Retta, What frightens me is where this comes from ;-) This is a bone chilling read. Well done!
Reviewed by Mary Quire 11/7/2004
Late or not, it's terrifying.

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader) 11/6/2004
Sisters Grim..lololol...What can one say, it's not dark, it's black..
Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger 11/6/2004
Reindeer, this poetic well-penned treat clearly illustrates the final destination and results for those who have chosen to serve a “Dead God!” Excellent work, my friend. I loved it! Thanks for sharing your work. Take good care and be well.
Reviewed by E T Waldron 11/6/2004
Reindeer this is fantastic dark as the abyss and scarier than any halloween;-)! Nobody does this better Great duet!

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