|Reviewed by Amira van Kerk
|Well, this is interesting.
Is it really about your wife? Never knew this. But if, lucky you.
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
o, this is WONDERFUL! reminds me of beach boys and a certain old lady from pasadena :) excellent write--you bring california to those who have never experienced it
(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)
|Reviewed by Dale Clark
|California dreaming. ;) Great piece!|
|Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger
|Peter, they don’t call it “The Golden State” for nothing, my friend. Such a wonderful feast for the heart, mind and soul. Absolutely well-done! Thanks for sharing it. Take care and don’t forget to pack your tanning lotion… lol.|
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|Sounds and feels really good, Peter. Love and peace. Regis|
|Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson
|Utterly delightful poem, Peter! I just spent a month's vacation time in San Diego, California and Santa Fe, New Mexico and it was a wonderful time of fun and writing!|
|Reviewed by jude forese
|love and celebration go hand and hand ... great visuals to this poem ...|
|Reviewed by Rose L
One simply MUST listen to the Beach Boys or Santana while reading this beautiful poem.
|Reviewed by A PAX
lol your married to a Latina!
No wonder you are inspired Senor!
Did you ever hear that song Smooth..........Santa and Rob somebody??? Oh I cannot think of the name now........
he wrote it for his Latin wife.......
your write is loving and beautiful as always :)
|Reviewed by Kate Burnside
|Yee-haa! Goooood vibrations here, Peter. I wrote two poems for my "starlet" niece's wedding this summer - but I reckon I could have written "The Golden Gate" just for you two!! Many congratulations on communicating a "love so fine" and may it's glow continue in your lives forever!! LOL Kate xx|
|Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain
This one is as "hot" as the Mojave Desert sun!! A divinely created romantic write "steaming" with compassion!!
|Reviewed by Amelia Peterson (Reader)
|Gracias mi amigo, su amor es el mejor.
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|And I love this poem of yours, Peter; especially since I have an Hispanic bride, I love the ocean, desert, and Mexican cantinas, and San Francisco is one of my all time favorite cities!|
|Reviewed by Kate Clifford
|Very romantic, beautiful write!|
|Reviewed by Jeff Mason
|You have some wonderful thoughts and imagery at work here. -- Jeff|
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Most outstanding intertaining read!!
|Reviewed by George Carroll
|A Lover's song to his bride. Excellent, exquisite, pure poetry.|
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Peter your wife must be really something you are so generous with your compliments and beautiful poetry in her honor. Bless you! This is great!|