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Californian Babe On My Mind
by Peter Paton
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Californian Babe On My Mind

Golden haired babe
With LA smile
Brown eyed angel
Shimmering in the Californain sun
Sexy legs and ruby red lips
You left me breathless
Addicted to your love

In the Mojave Desert
We sealed our vows
Kissed and snuggled
The whole nite through
Hand in hand
Heart to heart
We savored the taste
Of midnite love

Pacific blue
Warm waters divine
Blended our hearts
As we tasted sweet wine
Hispanic welcome
Te amor my bride

Frisco sounds
Clasp in your hair
We dined on Mexican
Castanets filled the air
Promises fulfilled
Designed for two
Californian babe
I love you true

Copyright by Peter Paton 2004

Californian Babe On My Mind

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Reviewed by Amira van Kerk
Well, this is interesting.
Is it really about your wife? Never knew this. But if, lucky you.
Excellent write.
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

o, this is WONDERFUL! reminds me of beach boys and a certain old lady from pasadena :) excellent write--you bring california to those who have never experienced it

(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)
Reviewed by Dale Clark
California dreaming. ;) Great piece!
Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger
Peter, they don’t call it “The Golden State” for nothing, my friend. Such a wonderful feast for the heart, mind and soul. Absolutely well-done! Thanks for sharing it. Take care and don’t forget to pack your tanning lotion… lol.
Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Sounds and feels really good, Peter. Love and peace. Regis
Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson
Utterly delightful poem, Peter! I just spent a month's vacation time in San Diego, California and Santa Fe, New Mexico and it was a wonderful time of fun and writing!
Reviewed by jude forese
love and celebration go hand and hand ... great visuals to this poem ...
Reviewed by Rose L
Ahhh Peter,

One simply MUST listen to the Beach Boys or Santana while reading this beautiful poem.

Well done!

Reviewed by A PAX
lol your married to a Latina!
No wonder you are inspired Senor!

Did you ever hear that song Smooth..........Santa and Rob somebody??? Oh I cannot think of the name now........
he wrote it for his Latin wife.......

your write is loving and beautiful as always :)
pax A
Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Yee-haa! Goooood vibrations here, Peter. I wrote two poems for my "starlet" niece's wedding this summer - but I reckon I could have written "The Golden Gate" just for you two!! Many congratulations on communicating a "love so fine" and may it's glow continue in your lives forever!! LOL Kate xx
Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain

This one is as "hot" as the Mojave Desert sun!! A divinely created romantic write "steaming" with compassion!!

Reviewed by Amelia Peterson (Reader)
Gracias mi amigo, su amor es el mejor.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
And I love this poem of yours, Peter; especially since I have an Hispanic bride, I love the ocean, desert, and Mexican cantinas, and San Francisco is one of my all time favorite cities!
Reviewed by Kate Clifford
Very romantic, beautiful write!
Reviewed by Jeff Mason
You have some wonderful thoughts and imagery at work here. -- Jeff
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Most outstanding intertaining read!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by George Carroll
A Lover's song to his bride. Excellent, exquisite, pure poetry.
Reviewed by E T Waldron
Peter your wife must be really something you are so generous with your compliments and beautiful poetry in her honor. Bless you! This is great!
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