|Reviewed by Dawn Richerson
|don't have the words... but something about this one just blows me away, Kate. i've got to save it and reread it again, but needless to say, your writing is sensational here. Dawn|
|Reviewed by jude forese
|awesome! security in deep waters is what keeps us afloat ... excellent imagery ... really like "essential essence" and
But my ropes are oiled:
A triple twine of sense, sensuality and spirit
slithers, slides and slips through my fingers,
loosening my grasp on a material world
profoundly insightful and moving poem!
|Reviewed by Jack Roberts
|Wonderful write Kate!
|Reviewed by Cynth'ya firstname.lastname@example.org
|This is true "HOMELAND" (heaven) security.
blessin's, this is beautiful,
cynth'ya lewis reed
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|You plundered poseidons treasure;-) outstanding work Kate!
Word usage is brilliant!
|Reviewed by Phillip William Allen
|Well Done Kate, Well Done|
|Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz
|Oh Kate girl...this is stupendous!!!
Love the alliteration in it, too.
A great piece of work.
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
GAD i love the way you write--you don't just write poetry, you immerse the reader wholly and fully into your vision--i applaud your brilliance, your creativity and your mind...share some of that with me, would you?? seriously--this is AWESOME--BRAVA!
(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)
|Reviewed by A PAX
|Beautiful images......very inspirational
trust in YOURself.......
its the best way......no matter the environment.........pax A
|Reviewed by Kate Clifford
|Profound write. Your writing has been fantastic lately! So many gems!|
|Reviewed by Kenny Moon
|oh, like a ship without a sail, yet bravely steering a course through the dark water. I like salt-air poems like this one. k|
|Reviewed by Janet Parker
|Articulate, imaginative and powerful. We try to control our own destiny, but it's never up to us anyway. The way you expressed letting go in the last stanza, gave me an enormous feeling of relief.|
|Reviewed by The Smoking Poet
|Trust is letting go, indeed. I like this... meaning with alliteration and word play, triple twined.|
|Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
|Beautiful write Kate, some deep thoughts to ponder.|
|Reviewed by Sherry Heim
|There is so much strength in this poem, Kate. Your sense of direction never falters. Your use of images to express emotions is excellent.
|Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger
|Kate, I must echo Master Poet Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU sentiments, and add this, my friend. You continue to encourage and inspire the masses with your uncanny ability to create timeless treasures. Thank you for enlightening the pages of history. Take good care and be well.|
|Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU
|"At Sea" one can dive and find the aroma of perseverance. This poem is to be studied for its source of wisdom, and major art expression.
Healthy Blissful Day, Poet!
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU