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Mistakes
by Tinka Boukes
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“Mistakes”


 


If there was one mistake less
And that mistake was me
What other mistake could there be
My mistake now your mistake
Daddy made a mistake
Oops then came me
Mamma made a mistake
She had me
Doctor made a mistake
A mistake by not killing me
Now I am killing you
And that was your mistake
Not for killing me first
Now for the big mistake you liked me
No mistake I love you
Now I made another mistake
A mistake by telling you
Now another big mistake
Not loving me
And now I've got a big miss - take
To try and make this mistake okay
But my mistake is
I don't know how
To fix big mistakes
Sorry my mistake You
Your mistake


ME


 


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Reviewed by Cynthia Castle 12/11/2004
Tinka,

We all make mistakes or miss-takes, but you are not a mistake! Keep your chin up and smile!

Cynthia
Reviewed by Carole Mathys 12/9/2004
a very interesting view of "mistakes"
Reviewed by Karen Chalfant (Reader) 12/9/2004
God creates no mistakes. This is a touching, heartfelt write. I'm glad I ran into it.

Karen
Reviewed by Mr. Ed 12/9/2004
I'm glad I did not mistakenly miss this write about mistakes - what a mistake that would have been!
Reviewed by William Bonilla 12/9/2004
And some ramble on .......Lol
a creative mistake
nice peiec.....Tinka

William .....Peace & Love
Reviewed by Ed Matlack 12/8/2004
Like Jude said it is clever...or your record is stuck, give it a little tap and get it going again...LOL, Ed & Rufuz
Reviewed by jude forese 12/8/2004
if i'm not mistaken this is really clever ;)
Reviewed by Michael Charles Messineo 12/8/2004
Tinka, Great write!!! Clever and mistake free!!!

...Michael
Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain 12/8/2004
Tinka,

"Mistakes" takes the reader through a clever depiction of 'rhyme and reason' - a melancholic write intertwined with strong inner feelings ... remember though, 'Your faith should remain constant under all conditions'!!

Robert
Reviewed by Phillip William Allen 12/8/2004
The only mistakes one can make in life is to not forget the past, and not look to the future. Sad pen but deep thoughts
Reviewed by Lori Moore 12/8/2004
Nice write. The size of a mistake is often relative to how we handle its consequences. Enjoyed.
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner 12/8/2004
(((tinka)))

pic is sad

and so is this write

shattering...hope you're okay *tears*

(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :(
Reviewed by Al Swanson (Reader) 12/8/2004
but this mistake business is some mis take, or like a steak, to take, W, smile, colorful and humorous Tink, Al
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader) 12/8/2004
The pic's a killer.

Love the tounge in cheek humour.

Mistake Andy..
Reviewed by Dale Clark 12/8/2004
Tinka, this is heartwrenching really. I'd like
to see you not looking at anything as a mistake
least of all you. There's a reason for all.
Reviewed by E T Waldron 12/8/2004
Tinka you are really something!;-) I can't help but
laugh at this tongue twister, even the sad parts;-)
Great write!
Reviewed by Kate Clifford 12/8/2004
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