|Reviewed by Karen Chalfant (Reader)
|This is wonderful, Karla! The meaning is deep and the words flowed effortlessly. Great job!|
|Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)
|This reminds me of the story I saw on television about the cop yesterday that kept a woman from jumping off the bridge. Sometimes life does seem to get you down but we bounce back.|
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
Powerful, gripping write that just rips out the heart when the reader takes in the words! Your writing has taken on a whole new level; continue to soar and reach higher!! Well done; BRAVA!!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D
|Reviewed by Kate Clifford
|You have touched a very deep emotion with this write. Glad your okay. I think it is good when we allow our thoughts to drift into all possiblilite and then write about it. You don't have to jump to have an idea what it would feel like. Great write.|
|Reviewed by Carole Mathys
|A profound, powerful write|
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Very powerful write Karla!!
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|Extremely powerful write, Karla.|
|Reviewed by Dawn Richerson
|the loneliness in this is palpable. excellent writing!|
|Reviewed by Abdi-Noor Mohamed (Eagle Of Hope)
Land of despair leaves pain in my soul.
|Reviewed by Danielle Mundy
|Very powerful write, Karla. I think we all see ourselves in this place from time to time...but I'm glad you're ok :)|
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|I am glad you are okay, Karla. This powerful write could give one the wrong impression. Well done. Amour et paix à toi mon amie. Régis|
|Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen
|Powerful write Karla, keep it up...
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Wonderful capture of how we sometimes see ourselves in this dark and weary world! That's why we need the Light!;-)Great poem Ms Karla!|
|Reviewed by jude forese
|eventually, we will all fall into grace ...
understanding despair allows us to soar ...
|Reviewed by Phillip William Allen
|Deep thoughts all through this piece. I hope the bridge is between two friends and not two banks of a river.
|Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
|Kinda a mix with metaphysical.
Well done babes
|Reviewed by Sherry Heim
|This is awesome, writing, Karla. You really took me to that place with you. Amazing images and emotions lacing through the verses.
|Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
|As Long As You Stand Before (God) Not Kneel Before Satan_
Excellent! Sounds Like True Meaning Of Christmas!
Your True Friend,TRASK
|Reviewed by A PAX
|wow........this is awsome, very dramatic, I know its just fiction, but its chilling........excellent!
It just reaches out and grabs the reader.........
leaving us to feel hopeless, which is the signature of a fantastic write........you took us there.......(and this better be fiction lady lol...I know it is you have to much spirit in you for it to be reality)
my son is home from the middle east!! I haven't seen him yet he is down south with his wife, but he is home!! :)
|Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger
|Karla, this is a wonderfully well-penned and balanced soul-gripping write. Loved the closing stanza. Thank you for sharing it. Take care and be well.|
|Reviewed by George Jackson
|A very haunting, descriptive, well written poem. Great work!|