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| Reviewed by Sandra Mushi |
6/7/2005 |
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I love the flow, Linda. As you go, you can actually feel the fury in the pace of the words and the venting to emotions - the intensity of the passion in it. Great work!!
God bless,
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| Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic |
1/23/2005 |
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oooo I like this ..indeed I do...wow!
Saved this one! Thankyou Linda!
Vesna :) |
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| Reviewed by E. Richardson |
1/7/2005 |
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| strong, raw emotion here...splendid work, Linda. |
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| Reviewed by andrea coltman |
1/6/2005 |
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| Powerful write Linda, welcome to the Den and thank you for visiting my pages, Happy New Year...best wishes Andrea |
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| Reviewed by Reginald Birch |
1/5/2005 |
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This is not fantasy this is real life, I could feel the anguish and relief in reading your wonderful piece.
Well done Linda,
Reg
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| Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU |
12/30/2004 |
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"Inner Explosion" depicts the emotions to flow on to the lake of a grand poem poetized with the lexicon of a wise soul.
I enjoyed the reading of this poetic masterpiece, named "Inner Explosion".
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU |
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| Reviewed by William DeVault |
12/25/2004 |
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| Like a furious lion that hasn't eaten...nice evocation there. Keep up the good work! |
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| Reviewed by Cynth'ya cynthyaspeaks@gmail.com |
12/22/2004 |
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Wonderful thing about writing--it vents the emotions.
Keep it flowing outward and sharing it my sister, and allow us all to share the words and encourage you.
blessin's
cynth'ya lewis reed
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| Reviewed by ♥ Kari Hirshey ♥ (Reader) |
12/17/2004 |
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I love the energy and passion in this write; thanks for sharing! :)
~Kari Anne~ |
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| Reviewed by Debra Conklin |
12/17/2004 |
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The energy of intense hatred just drips from this one. Great job.
Debbie |
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| Reviewed by Chuckie Finn |
12/17/2004 |
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I have read that one of the keys to effective writing is to capture your readers attention with your opening sentence. Well you have certainly achieved much more than that with this creative and fascinating poem. You enable your readers to ride on an emotional roller coaster ride experiencing the haunting frustration and inner wrath that seeks its remedy.
Wonderfully done, Linda. My sincere compliments.
Chuckie |
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| Reviewed by Tracey L. O' Very (Reader) |
12/17/2004 |
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| You sure did capture this one. Big time got this one right one the nose. Beem here am here. Thank you for this. Must send this to all |
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| Reviewed by William Bonilla |
12/16/2004 |
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Well Penned ....Linda
great line smooth cadence.
William ......Love & Peace |
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| Reviewed by Kate Clifford |
12/16/2004 |
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| Very powerful write and great capture of the release! |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
12/16/2004 |
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Linda first time I've read your work but I'M SURE I'LL READ A LOT MORE IN FUTURE. Thanks for reviewing my work as well.
Felix |
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| Reviewed by Kate Burnside |
12/15/2004 |
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| Yup, can relate... better out than in, this one, I think! Hope you're feeling better now - and that you have been able to vent your anguish to the skies so that there will be no "payback"! Like a stopcock going off... sense a real feeling of relief! TY Kate xx |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
12/11/2004 |
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Very powerful poetry Linda!!
Love Tinka |
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| Reviewed by Phillip William Allen |
12/11/2004 |
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| Shake those emotions real good before you uncork them, that way they explode like a Pepsi leaving the bottle empty of all lifes acids. well Penned |
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| Reviewed by Dawn Richerson |
12/10/2004 |
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| Linda, raw and unrelenting write about the darker urges that reside within us all. |
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| Reviewed by J. Allen Wilson |
12/10/2004 |
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Wow, this is intense to say the least. Strong and forceful write. Excellent display of pain inflicted...both given and taken.
Allen |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
12/10/2004 |
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| Powerful stuff, Linda. I could not resume breathing until you allowed me at the end of this enthralling creation. Thank you for sharing this offering. Love and peace. Regis |
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| Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK |
12/10/2004 |
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Welcome To Club Of Life Its Portals,Pitfalls,Downs & Outs Of Holy Hell!
Credit For Write!!
TRASK |
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| Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader) |
12/10/2004 |
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| Blimey new kid on the block, some write..Splendid.... |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
12/10/2004 |
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| wow Linda, the intensity of this poem is outstanding! your thoughts & feeling flow effortlessly in this very powerful poem ... |
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