|Reviewed by lois christensen
|A lovely poem seems magical, but is marvelous and such a lovely water scene photo. You keep me going, Regis, out of the depths of despair!|
|Reviewed by JASMIN HORST SEILER
REGIS! I love the last line, very deep, well said! Jasmin Horst
|Reviewed by Helen Downey
|You have covered many aspects of time so well.I enjoyed this perfectly rhymed poem. Bravo to you Regis!
|Reviewed by Pearl Blevins
|Great Poem. A very good subject to write about and you captured it extrememly well.
I also have a poem entitled Time!
|Reviewed by Paul Williams
|Beautiful write Regis very profound...I can really relate to this
|Reviewed by Jimmy Holder
|Of wilted flowers and ancient powers
Of magic brews and crumbling towers
and secret crypts
|Reviewed by Amira van Kerk
|Love the ending of that outstanding write.
Time is priceless.
|Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz (Reader)
|Oh, I so do agree with that final line, Regis!
The entire piece is most thought-provoking. Well written.
And...you are better looking without the hair. I used to
fancy Yul Brunner, and once saw him wearing a wig....ughhh!
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
mon ami, you have penned a beautiful poem full of wisdom and i can't thank you enough--magnificent!
(((HUGS))), love and merry Christmas, karla. :)
|Reviewed by Denise Edwards
|Great , Regis. Full of wisdom and grace!|
|Reviewed by ya mama (Reader)
|nice one regis|
|Reviewed by Kate Burnside
|... and you've managed to capture its myriad candyfloss flavours here, Regis! So much packed into a microsecond - its easy to see why time is limitless! TY Kate xx|
|Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot
|Acutely accurate and inspirational, ty for this Regis, glad to be able to read you again.
|Reviewed by Zenith Elliott
|Beautifully penned, Regis! ~Z~|
|Reviewed by William Bonilla
|a Beautiful write ...Regis
|Reviewed by Desiree Baker (Reader)
|Very Nice Regis, some inspriational work and the words show you an image! Great write!
|Reviewed by Karen Chalfant (Reader)
|This is great, Regis! Moments of time are caught by memories and remembered by the senses. Wonderful poem!|
|Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
|Ah, I loved this, very beautiful, that last line just wonderful,
|Reviewed by Lori Moore
|Wonderful images. A true beauty.|
|Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain
Beautiful art exemplifies your grand poetic style - a stunningly perfect write ... thanks for this one!!
|Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)
|I liked the way this poem goes and the way you ended it with time being eternity.|
|Reviewed by Ed Matlack
|I hope that eternity IS time infinitum and that our progeny and that of theirs and so on do experience eternity the same if not better than that of our time on this old earth...I did so enjoy sharing with you a bit of your one day in eternity herein this poem...Find Peace, Ed & Rufuz|
|Reviewed by Sage Writer (Reader)
|Yes, Regis, true. Pacing, being in a hurry, yelling, and all the things we do, like pat our feet, does not bother time. Time is not our master, it is us who tries to master time. Thanks for sharing a bit of time with us.|
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|Beautiful imagery, mon ami! C'est magnifique! Well done!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
|Reviewed by Eddie Thompson
|magic brews, crumbling towers, and secret crypts....sounds like every story i've ever loved...thanks for the reminder of this endless day.|
|Reviewed by A. Gagné (Reader)
|Beautiful. Thank you for sharing your thoughts in such a gentle, praiseworthy manner. :)|
|Reviewed by Carole Mathys
|Exemplary write Regis....your words paint pictures so vivid...I can see them
|Reviewed by Nordette Adams
|Superb, Regis! Again you've imparted meaning not just with your words, but also with rhythm. You've created the sound effect of spinning round. Some reviewers have mentioned the sense of merry-go-round. It reminds me of your "Afraid" poem in which you had the ticking drone effect of time, which can be disturbing. However, in this poem you give us the delightful ta-da-da-da-ta-da-da-da-ta-da-da-da-Dance of Time. Excellent! I love a poet who takes the time to craft a piece.
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Wonderful poem Regis...now I want to share my poem with the same title with you if I may....
Kites seek the wind here
Sea oats practice
Their patient sway
Of seasons and year
Dunes rise from the sand
Carved in a sculptor's caress
Would dare to dream
Of creation on a scale
Of unbounded distance
A seagull holds in the breeze
Wings stretched wide
Like a lover's arms
Unspoken word to the wind
"Come to me"
While the morning sun
Still raises its eyes to the clouds
Shells dot the sand shelf
In places the ocean
Swept them last night
Flowing promises of return
Maybe the sand still remembers
Of hearts drawn
With names underneath
Carvings of hopes
And small dreams
That are washed away daily
And this place bowing
At different paces
To what finds us
And binds us both...
Copyright ©2003 – 2004 Tinka Boukes
All Rights Reserved
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|Glad I took the time to read this one, Regis; it's a timeless gem.|
|Reviewed by George Jackson
|This is an excellent take on the subject of time, something I seem to be drawn to in most of my works, but you grasp it so much better. Very well penned. Thank you.|
|Reviewed by Phillip William Allen
|Like a Merry-Go-Round, I want one more go round. Well done Regis|
|Reviewed by Pamela Kimmell
|Simply wonderful poetry....we seem to become more aware of time as we get older too. I often have that subject running through my head as I write AND live my life. This is just beautiful.|
|Reviewed by Handsum Hart
|Simply smashing! Write on Regis
|Reviewed by Chanti Niven
|"I close my eyes
How the time flies
I feel it race
Perceive its depth
Upon my face
I sense its breath"
I can so easily relate to the words in this poem. You have such a special gift Regis. I often read your poetry and marvel at how you are able to say so much in so few words. The imagery you've created with your words can be related to by many. In my own life at times the pace is frenetic and this is when I have a deep desire to walk in a quiet place surrounded by nature. When you are listening to the soothing sound of a stream, breathing the redolence of the earth and hearing the sounds of birdsong it is easy to feel as though time has stopped for a while.
Beautiful write and profound ending.
Take care precious friend...Chanti
|Reviewed by Huda Orfali
|Of unmet dreams and love affairs
and childhood toys
That's wonderful, it seems like yesterday I was playing with toys but my dreams are never met today.
If I stop dreaming, I stop breathing, then time will stop for me.
Love & Peace
|Reviewed by Kate Clifford
|Thought provoking write! Love it!|
|Reviewed by Danielle Mundy
|Wow! This is great writing, Regis. Time is never ending and eternal..though we never seem to have enough of it to appreciate fuly the things we are blessed with.|
|Reviewed by Janet Parker
|Wow! this is outstanding, Regis.|
|Reviewed by Ann Marquette
|Wow! awesome, beautiful, very moving. Oh the memories...
|Reviewed by Sarah Tagert
|awesome write! Keep up the good work!!|
|Reviewed by Tracey L. O' Very (Reader)
|This is Beautiful Regis. Eternity's an endless day. So Beautiful.
Ths Picture in itself takes me places you write of here. Thanks so much Regis Beautiful.
God Bless You
|Reviewed by Sherry Heim
|This is a fantastic write, Regis. I like the thought about the merry-go-round. It really pulls it all into perspective.
Take care, Sherry
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|A wondrous capture of the endless continuum Regis! I love this poem and the photo is sublime!...love Eileen|
|Reviewed by A PAX
|Time is such a personal concept.......this is very sweet!|
|Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
|I concur with ACE. Most are, Time reflexing like a whore falls wan**ng to the floor. Is what I feel like saying to so many. But Regis this is above all, showing poetry skill on a subject I had never found commenting on yet..nice one|
|Reviewed by jude forese
|ususally poems about time are trite and uninspired but this poem is ineffable in perspective, imagery and delivery ...|
|Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
|Really Time You Humaity Has Little Left--Better Make Best Of Eternitys Endless Pacing Day!