|Reviewed by Jim Moore (Reader)
|Yo Ho, Yo Ho, a pirate's life for me!
|Reviewed by Georg Mateos
|Being an old sailor that had reincarnated many times to live again the bucaneer's life...I don't thing she would have walk on the plank of my ship, she would had shared all of my treasures.
A poem full of Rum, Cutthroats Swords and fun under the sails.
A big cheers Chanti Lass!!!!
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
|Arrrrrrrr. :) An engaging story, this: aye, well done!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
|Reviewed by Larry Lounsbury
|Looks likes treasure Island for sure."With one man of her crew alive,
What put to sea with seventy-five."
|Reviewed by Donald Meadows
|Good on you Shipmate!!
I'm an old salt myself. Spent 22 years on submarines. Good to see such a love of the sea in such a youngin! Bravo Zulu!!
D. Clayton Meadows
OF ICE AND STEEL
|Reviewed by Cynthia Castle
What a great story and a delightful write for your son. You are a very gifted and gentle hearted person and a wonderful mother! I look forward to the next installment also. Thanks for sharing this treasure!
|Reviewed by Handsum Hart
|I'm sure your son will enjoy this tale. I hope she is a good swimmer.
Joy and sunshine
|Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain
C'est magnifique - great prose ... stunning all the way!!
|Reviewed by jude forese
|and now she will become a buried treasure deep within the sea ...
|Reviewed by Michelle Mills
|Really cool story!!!! Imagery is excellent Chanti. If there is an additional installment coming, I'll be really interested in seeing what's next on Shanty's plate! Michelle|
|Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger
|Chanti, this was a wonderful and delightful story/poem. Iím sure your son enjoyed it too. Canít wait for the next installment. Thanks for sharing it. x-marks the spot.|
|Reviewed by Dale Clark
|I'm a little over 12 ;) and I love
a pirate's tale. Brava Chanti!
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|Delightfully captivating, Chanti. It makes me yearn for more. I think she is a survivor. Thank you for sharing this offering. Love to you, my friend. Regis|
|Reviewed by Jeff Mason
|Avast ye mateys! She must not have drowned; as we had planned; she must have swum ashore and taken the next ship to Treasure Planet! An entertaining write, Chanti. -- Jeff|
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Chanti what a fortunate son to have a mother who writes as beautifully as you do! I'm sure he loved this one, as did I!;-)!|
|Reviewed by Carole Mathys
|Absolutely love it....as a child it was one of the imaginary games we use to play...your son must love it
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Great write Chanti!!
|Reviewed by Kate Clifford
|Great fantasy write!|
|Reviewed by Sherry Heim
|There is something rough, disgusting and magical about pirates, and you have captured these things perfectly in this well constructed and perfectly penned masterpiece, Chanti. I love that you have a lady pirate in this. From what I have read, she must have posed as a man to get aboard the ship since women were never allowed, but occasionally found a way.(Women were considered bad luck on a pirate ship, you know) I am glad I came here late so that I know there is another chapter in this wonderful tale. Excellent writing, Chanti. Take a bow!
|Reviewed by Chanti Niven
|Hey Felix you might just get to read a next installment. It is already part written. Of course she can't die. That would be just wrong! My son loved the story but doesn't know what to think about the fact that the heroine is a lady pirate.
Thanks to everyone else for the kind reviews. I know that this story / poem is not earth shattering, nor is it going to change the world but if you have kids they might enjoy it. How about writing something along the same lines and sending me the link? I challenge you all to write a fantasy poem aimed at children. Looking forward to seeing the results.
Anna nothing suprises me anymore. I consider it an honour that we have a lot in common. You are such an inspiration to me.
|Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz (Reader)
|I cannot believe how many things we share in common, Chanti,
especially since reading this poem. My son, who disappeared 18
years ago, is named David! He loved to play 'pirate' as a child,
and I enjoyed playing right along with it. I miss him terrribly.
Thank you for extending your marvelous poetic talents in this
darling write! Your graphics, and poetry, continue to inspire me.
|Reviewed by Nordette Adams
|A fun write, Chanti. I love pirate movies as a child.
About your hotlinked pic in this pic. Go back to the site you're linking it from. Right click and save it to your hard drive, then upload it to your AD den here. Use your AD link and the picture will appear correctly on this piece.
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|Cute write Chanti, I'll be waiting for the next installment of this one...too good for her to die so soon.
|Reviewed by William Bonilla
|well buckle me timbers
real kool write .......Chanti
William ....peace & love
|Reviewed by George Jackson
|I wanted to be a pirate when I was a boy. This is great!|
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|Wonderful buccaneer tale, Chanti - and she was a brave one, indeed.|
|Reviewed by Phillip William Allen
|Great theme and flow. She was smart in keeping its location to her self. Had she devuldged it she would have to walk the plank anyway. Stupid pirates, lose two treasures at once.|
|Reviewed by A PAX
|I love pirate poetry!!!!!!!!!
this is so well written, very mature, great rhyme, you have told a tale here, and to make it more unique...you created a heroine
not a hero
you are one talented kid!!
keep writing......you have the magic touch
I see good things in your future
Polish your skills, enjoy them
they are yours and no one can ever take that away from you in life
Your thoughts are you.......your spirit....and being
And you have a creative lining to your soul
|Reviewed by Silke Lance, Dr. Ph (Reader)
|Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
|But did she swim ashore or drown, find treasure, find girl friday, or Tom Hanks?
I sure he loves this. As do I Chantil...
|Reviewed by Dawn Richerson
|I've got an 11-year-old who loves pirates. We watch "Pirates of the Carribbean" about once a month... :) Thanks for this,|