|Reviewed by Carole Mathys
|a heart-rending sad write, but so beartufully done, Carole|
|Reviewed by Nordette Adams
|Your use of repetition here would certainly leave a lover bereft and immeasurably forlorn with the understanding that he could never have the one he loved, Tinks.|
|Reviewed by Cynthia Castle
Your ability to express such heartfelt emotion is stunning! A beautiful, but sad expression of longing for love. Thank you for sharing your talent. Love the picture, also!
|Reviewed by William Bonilla
|a sad soft and wonderful write
William .....peace & Love
|Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green
|Beautifully evocative. Affecting!! And the illustration
is gorgeous. Thank you for posting this, Tinka.
For being y o u ! 'Fiss' <3
|Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain
A beautifully mastered and extremely well-versed, exceptionally crafted poem - marvelous ... you are a poetess supreme!!
|Reviewed by A PAX
|Things change, nothing is engraved in stone......as long as we are alive there is always a second chance, or third, or ummmm
you know what i mean lol
hey you make your own decisions in life....have to make yourself happy,
|Reviewed by Linda Roman
|sad and lovely at the same time...|
|Reviewed by Al Swanson (Reader)
|well I guess these are sentiments murmered by many tink, well scripted, Al|
|Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)
|The poem echoes the sentiment expressed in the song.|
|Reviewed by George Jackson
|This one hit real close to home for me, the secret places of my heart, where I wait patiently for her to finally look my way. A keeper, this one. Excellent, Tinka.|
|Reviewed by Dale Clark
|A sad love poem. Keep the faith.|
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|super sad poem Tinka!I hope your mood will be uplifted and you can rejoice in the remembered Birth of a savior who loves you!|
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|Bitter bitter sweet and extremely sad write, Tinka.
Hope everything is OK.
|Reviewed by Sherry Heim
|Sometimes abandoning a sinking ship is the only way to get to safety. It seems that you have reached that point, Tinka. A very sad and lonely write.
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|heartfelt and sad, tinks; well done as always!
thank you for your review on my new story; much appreciated, friend!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in america, karen lynn in texas. :)