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| Reviewed by E. Richardson |
12/27/2004 |
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| this is good...brought back many memories, especially your mention of the Kankakee. I spent a lot of time on that river in both IN and IL. ..and I use to do lot of target shooting down in Enos...and my favorite dream place was Fetla's...thanks for the memories lady...splendid write here. |
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| Reviewed by Tracey L. O' Very (Reader) |
12/17/2004 |
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This sounds like the road through Ut i-15 that once was all the neat little towns that now are bypassed and all those good juicy hamburgers in Nephi and fresh fruit stands in Santa Clara cute little ol towns Meadow for one and the juke boxes on the tables and the sweet lil ol waitress in Beaver, now not even seen . This is a neat write here about the "progress?" we're making. Thanks
Merriest Christmas' and Blessed years
Tracey |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
12/14/2004 |
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| Captivating verses, Lori. Thank you. Love and peace. Regis |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
12/12/2004 |
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the ghosttowns of america are increasing along its highways and byways ...
excellent poem! |
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| Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader) |
12/11/2004 |
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| I think that we all know highways like this. We have several in our state that has plenty of ghosts to tell tales. |
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| Reviewed by Larry Rochelle |
12/11/2004 |
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| 55 sounds as famous as Route 66. Bet you have more stories to tell?! |
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| Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK |
12/11/2004 |
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Ghosts That Drove Me Home On Highway Rt 30T,5 Other Highways Streets Of 50;70 Miles From Home From Dancen & Drinking,Partying All Night,i.e. Either That Or My Olds Drove By Itself Remote Control Dozens Of Times Strangely Got Me Back Home-I Never Wrecked My Cars!
EXCELLENTLY DONE GOOD!
TRASK |
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| Reviewed by Michelle Close Mills |
12/11/2004 |
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| I just drove down US 1 in Indiana today...and felt much as you did about the memories shared in this piece...lots of ghosts...old homes and barns that just cried out to be saved, rusting cars, abandoned brick schoolhouses from the early 1900's that had caved in from neglect. This is a great piece Lori. |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
12/11/2004 |
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Nice write with many memories worth preserving in words that will live on.
Felix |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
12/11/2004 |
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(((lori)))
thank you for memories from the midwest--grew up in ohio, have been through indiana, and yes, i remember highway 55. :) the worst wreck i ever had was 20 miles from indianapolis, a week after the indy 500 LOL girlfriend was driving, i was snoozing in the passenger side...dreaming i was on a rollercoaster...i woke up and HEY, we're flipping down the highway!!!!!! cruise control went out at the same time a tire blew...not pretty. thank God we all had seatbelts on and no one was seriously injured or killed...cop told us we were a week late for the indy 500 LOL
thanks for the memory--vivid imagery makes this a keeper--
(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :) |
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