|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|Remember all the good in me
Don't you ever forget it either, Tinky!
|Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
|This was so beautiful, like a song, lovely Tinka!
|Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot
|This is what we call here in OZ " A you beaut write" Tink you have penned a masterpiece, good onya mate.
|Reviewed by jude forese
|riding the emotional tides in this one ...|
|Reviewed by Rebecca Burns
|That was wonderful, thank you. Rebecca|
|Reviewed by D May (Reader)
|Tinka--your words are left lingering in this write. Very profound thoughts in this.|
|Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain
"Take Me" is a true poetic treasure - speaks of inner feelings and soulfulness ... exceptional!!
Keep the faith,
|Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
|Lovely write Tinka.|
|Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)
|Another beautiful poem that is set well to music. I love the sea also.|
|Reviewed by Faye Enno (Reader)
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|breathtaking poetry and pic, tinka; this is too beautiful! well done; enjoyed so much~
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in america, karen lynn in texas. :D
|Reviewed by James Daniels
|Well done. I can say that you truly did grab me and make me want to read more. Kepp up the great work.|
|Reviewed by Sara Coslett
|Tinka, this is a well crafted poem of hopelessness; which I hope, like the others have asked, is just poetry. I think you need a balloon ride to cheer you up. Hope all is well? ~ Sara|
|Reviewed by George Jackson
|Whatever the intent of this poem, I hope that whatever pain you, or another may (or may not, might be just your musings)be going through, that you (or them) can work through it. I think you are a great writer, and have learned much from you. Thank you for sharing this.
|Reviewed by A PAX
Tinka...self esteem! Self esteem!!!
I don't know if I am reading this wrong, but it sounds like someone who has given up on everthing.......God will set you free, but not thru death........he gives strength...........
Don't them them get you down!
you are better than that!!!
This write scares me ms tinka.........
I hope i read it wrong........I hope i missed the message, because the message I got was so depressing and sad...........
do you have a trusted person to talk to???/
be well.......be positive and be brave........if my review is off the mark.......just delete it and my apologies for my confusion........