|Reviewed by Carole Mathys
|a lovely sad write Dawn..|
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
i love the format of scattered thoughts that combine to make one powerful poem! VERY powerful and shattering emotions vividly expressed. well done!
(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :(
|Reviewed by Linda Roman
|sad, but I like... very nice|
|Reviewed by Daniel McTaggart
|Sounds like a continuous strand of unedited thought. And sometimes those make the best little poems. Sad but good, Dawn.|
|Reviewed by George Jackson
|Sad, but exceptional, not just in form, but in substance. A poem that captures the very essence of loss. Another excellent poem, Dawn.|
|Reviewed by Sue Hess
|this is great and i enjoyed the form you used. it flowed very nicely|
|Reviewed by Debashish Haar (Reader)
|Very sad poem, I read it like a speed poem. Very spontaneous write...
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Sad write Dawn!!
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|I look to the sky,
in search of lost or
They are out there - and we must all search on.
|Reviewed by Jeff Mason
|keep hope alive Dawn! -- Jeff|
|Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers
|Somewhere, you will find the peace in which you are searching. Though the pain is intense, you behold the strength to endure and overcome.
|Reviewed by Janet Parker
|I feel sad for you, Dawn. There is no pain as bad as this. I know. But hope is down the road somewhere, with someone or no one.|
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Outstanding! Form looks like a pregnant woman!;-)?|
|Reviewed by Zenith Elliott
|well done, there will always be times when it seems like there will never be a happy ever after...but time can change that perception. ~Z~|
|Reviewed by Kate Clifford
|Know the feeling :-( Great write!|
|Reviewed by D May (Reader)
|Oh this is sad-- I like the form of this piece and how you said it.|
|Reviewed by jude forese
|how we see ourselves determines the outcome of our aspirations ... how others see us determines the perspective of our motives ... together, they can build a very happy ever after ...|