|Reviewed by Joshua Miller (Reader)
|Magical talent you have Erin! I have read many of your works posted here. I am in awe!|
|Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
|A deep and thought provoking write, will need to read this several times Erin to absorb all the nuances.|
|Reviewed by Nordette Adams
|Lots of meat in this verbal stew. :-) Thank you, Erin, especially for the provocative write.|
|Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper
|Very good and very interesting, have a happy holiday Erin. l&p G|
|Reviewed by Debashish Haar (Reader)
|I like the archaisms and that last couplet!
|Reviewed by Kate Burnside
|So profound, Erin. Just love this. It's so funny that we tend to think it will be our "adult" wisdom and learning that will lead to "enlightenment" - but it is the Ancient Child in us that is just waiting for true freedom and truth to bring us to the place of peace and fulfillment. Last two lines superb! It is no wonder that "heaven" is portrayed as being light, life and energy... like the atmosphere that surrounds children. TY Kate xx|
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|Soul-gripping verses, Erin. Thank you for sharing this powerful offering. Love and peace. Regis|
|Reviewed by Jeff Mason
|Incredibly moving. I feel the momentousnous, the timeless beauty of this poetry. -- Jeff|
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
a sensative, intuitive, GORGEOUS write you've penned--excellent!
(((HUGS))) and love, karla.
|Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain
Superlative write - beautiful imagery . . . "Piercing age shows sorrow's sad damage . . . " - excellent!!
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Very well penned Erin!!
|Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU
|"Ancient Child" Voices a profound message.
It gives me an image of a pilot that landed on a desert area. This pilot walks to an Oasis; he drinks from its water, and sleeps... The desert wind blows the sand over his aircraft. He wakes up in the morning and all he can see around are dunes, some as tall as mountains, all around is sand. “HAVE I LOST MY MEMORY”, – he questions – as he walks looking for his airplane.
This is a philosophical-historic surreal and symbolistical composition of poetic compliance in artistic expression.
Healthier be the eyes that may read this, "Ancient Child".
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
|Reviewed by Ed Matlack
|Are we not all ancient children, believing, if you will, in reincarnation, we have suffered through these lives before and may do so again...Ed|
|Reviewed by Sherry Heim
|This flows beautifully, Erin. Strong statement and profound images weave within your verses. Very nice!
|Reviewed by William Bonilla
|A well Penned piece
William .....Peace & Love
|Reviewed by Silke Lance, Dr. Ph (Reader)
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|You ignited me with this one Erin! awesome thoughts and images! ever evolving!|