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Line 'Em Up, Next One's On Me
by Sandy Knauer

Friday, December 17, 2004
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Published in Intrigue Magazine

http://www.silencespeaks.net/intrigue/?q=node/263


 

Line ĎEm Up, Next Roundís On Me

 

I was cold as hell, frozen in place with a racing heart,

keenly indifferent, and aching to be well. 

I was a losing winner. 

Or maybe a winning loser.

 

A monstrous little building ambushed me,

a bright spot in the night. 

I staggered in,

looking for a way out.

 

Tastefully bland and inhabited by emptiness,

it inspired me with its obscurity. 

Friendly strangers mixed with strange friends,

circling a square bar in soothing eeriness.

 

It was incredibly awesome

how the socially stagnant

blindly looked for anesthetized rapture,

each one alone in the crowd. 

 

Poised between enlightened confusion and nervous sedation,

I grew smaller. 

I heard the silence of my whispered screams,

smiled, and nodded, joyfully crying

until I was actively dead.

 

The experience was simply deep. 

Or deeply simple. 

I might have twisted myself straight. 

Itís possible I staggered out looking for a way in,

to a world already gone.

 

Line Ďem up, bartender, the next roundís on me.

 

Sandy Knauer

2004

 
 

Sandy Knauer
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Reviewed by Regis Auffray 3/24/2005
I think I relate to this almost too much; it's slapping me in the face. Powerfully expressed, Sandy. Thank you. Love and peace. Regis
Reviewed by Kate Clifford 3/1/2005
Fantastic, insightful write!
Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU 2/24/2005

"Line 'Em Up, Next One's On Me" IS FULL COMPLIANCE WITH POETRYīS SOUL, OFFERING AN ENJOYABLE READING.


Andre EmmanueL Bendavi ben-YEHU
Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen 2/23/2005
My goodness, I am breathless, in my head...

Exquisite word smithing, Sandy, creating a euphoria in my mind which mostly my own poetry causes, sometimes to the point of crippling myself... :)

This piece has it all, it shows, with brilliance, flow, reality, fantasy, imagination, creativity and a finely tuned awareness of self, and other selves.

"Friendly strangers mixed with strange friends,"

I love that line! Among the other juxtapositioning, this line epitomizes the title, offering the 'bar scene' of milling humanity with a surrealism which thrills my senses. You have a fine sense of establishing content, and capturing a reader's attention.

I want to 'feel' this abstraction with the same intensity as you've penned it, probably have, and didn't realize the portentiousness of time-stopping chaos, enraptured into observation.

Erin Elizabeth
Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain 1/18/2005
Sandy,

Sublime message here ... worded and versed to excellence - enjoyed this wonderful write!!

Best wishes,

Robert
Reviewed by Sue Hess 12/17/2004
wow, have i ever been here before...i loved the way you described it
Reviewed by D May (Reader) 12/17/2004
I love this Sandy...Scoot on down, order me a Scotch, straight up. : )
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado 12/17/2004
great message in this one, sandy! bottoms up (but me, i thinks i'll pass, thankyewverymuch...already have problems staying upright when SOBER! LOL)!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your stumbly-footed texas friend, karen lynn. :D
Reviewed by Jeff Mason 12/17/2004
Holy day, it's Sandy K! Sandy, it is *wonderful* to see you posting again! Sounds like you were at a confused spot, but you portrayed it wonderfully; excellent flow, form, imagery, and pertinent message. -- Jeff
Reviewed by Mr. Ed 12/17/2004
Itís possible I staggered out looking for a way in,
to a world already gone.

A most profound write, Sandy.

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