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Broken!
by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper
Friday, December 17, 2004
Rated "G" by the Author.
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A little touch of negativity with a dash of hope. Have a great holiday everyone. Not back, just visiting for the holiday. |
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Feeling a little broken,
but thank God I'm not choking.
This holiday has me around the neck,
but I'm not a total wreck.
The demand is great,
but I'm trying to control my fate,
not let the devil dictate.
Christmas bells, those Christmas bells,
they have us all under their spells.
Tis the season to be jolly,
think I'll watch out for the stickers on that holly.
Love the green and red berries,
but getting stuck adds to my worries.
Dashing through the snow,
red devil please let me go.
Get off my one horse open sleigh,
I want to have a joyous day.
Rudolf the red nose reindeer,
please, can I have some
of your holiday cheer?
Merry Christmas!
G
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| Reviewed by A PAX |
12/17/2004 |
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| love this! |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
12/17/2004 |
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(((grady)))
merry christmas...it's almost over...then the many happy returns start LOL
i'm a bah, humbugger, too--'cause i gotta work :(
but hope you're christmas is merry and bright
ours is supposed to be cooooooooldddddddd BRRRRRRR!
(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :) |
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| Reviewed by Sandy Knauer |
12/17/2004 |
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| Cute, Grady. Add me to the bah humbug group. I haven't hung a decoration or wrapped a gift, and may not. |
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| Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader) |
12/17/2004 |
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| Now don't dash too fast we don't won't a ticket so you can have a truly merry time with dear old Rufus. |
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| Reviewed by Charleen Burge (Reader) |
12/17/2004 |
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This is too cute, and I know exactly how you feel! Bah Humbug! I haven't bought one gift yet, and not one decoration have I hung.
Your friend
C
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
12/17/2004 |
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oh Happy Holidays dear One!!
I wish Christmas neve came this year for me....but it's here and we have to face it!!
Love Tinka |
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| Reviewed by Ed Matlack |
12/17/2004 |
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| I think if the Ravens were doing as well as the Eagles, you would be feeling much better I bet...Happy Holidays...Ed & Rufuz |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
12/17/2004 |
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| Grady, good to see you back even for a visit! Praying your spirits will lift as you celebrate God's gift! Merry Christmas, love, Eileen |
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| Reviewed by Debashish Haar (Reader) |
12/17/2004 |
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Very uplifting poem, Grady...Nice to read you once again...
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
12/17/2004 |
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(((Grady)))
Always happy to see you drop by! You are in my prayers; keep on keeping on, and have courage! Don't give up; I haven't! God bless you this holiday and always! Merry Christmas to you and yours, and the happiest, healthiest of New Years' to you too!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :) |
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
12/17/2004 |
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| Hope Rudolph helps you out, Grady; and the Happiest of Holidays to you! |
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| Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader) |
12/17/2004 |
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| Happy Holidays Grady, keep on keeping on. Love the poem, it can be the best and worst time of the year. |
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