|Reviewed by Jeremy Teoh
|i felt that once.I started to observe myself after an advice from a friend.heck,I realized many mistakes I did in life.
|Reviewed by m w
|God's answers are always within us, just sometimes very hard to find as our pain obscures his love.
Wonderful feeling here.. so well penned
|Reviewed by Amira van Kerk
|Tinka, whatever you did, it is past now and you can't make it unhappen. You are a good and sweet person. Whatever you did, he or she will surely forgive you. Just talk to that person personally, and I am sure you will find a way to regain your friendship.
Don't stay stuck in negative emotions. Move on.
|Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper
|Hey Tinka, you wrote it out. Sometimes feelings can take advantage of us. The worst thing to do is stay negative. Don't beat yourself. I've been tellng myself this all day. Cherry on! l&p G|
|Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
|Honest introspection. With the lords help.
PS S/A cricket team need the lords help..
|Reviewed by Faye Enno (Reader)
|Reviewed by Handsum Hart
|"No TV inter-net or radio to listen too" consider this a bonus.
Let the past bury the past. You cannot change it but you can shape your future, starting with this moment. Go for it!!!
Joy and starlight
|Reviewed by jude forese
|don't forget, your face is flicking in luminosity ...|
|Reviewed by Lori Moore
|With the new day, we have a new start. Nice write.|
|Reviewed by Dave Harm
|Getting "into the silence" is a tranquil respite from life. At times, its easier to find then others. And at times, its depressing because of the "old tapes" that play in our mind. To realize, these tapes are more about shame then guilt, is the beginning of the journey for ones "true self." Let go of the shame, let go of the past, then silence IS golden. Enjoyed this, understood everything you said. Take care, Dave|
|Reviewed by Rebecca Burns
|Tina, that was deep and moving. We all see that face, the one we dont' want to admit, but it shows too often when we are alone. I hope you realize that behind the face in the candle is a strong, strong woman. Thanks for sharing. Rebecca|
|Reviewed by Sherry Heim
|Tinka, there is not a lot that you can do about the past, other than learn from it and make a commitment to yourself to become a better person. Today is a brand new day and your life moves forward from here. Embrace the innocence and promise of the sunrise and vow to make a fresh start. Sweep the skeletons from your closet and free yourself from self-degradation. There are no perfect people in this world and no one should expect themselves to be.
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|I have recently realized that I am letting go of all the mistakes that I have made. I am not looking back either. Only the "now" really counts. Love, peace and strength to you. Regis|
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Tinks remember your bible"All fall short of the glory of God" and Let he who is without sin cast the first stone!" It's good to examine ourself ;but finish up with reality and truth if you can, then start over and put the doubts behind you! Excellent write!|
|Reviewed by Al Swanson (Reader)
|I thin k this was astutely romantic, I have a hard time saying things in English anymore, making the rhmes and stuff, sure you've been there, it is sure not to have someone reveal deep trade secrets, wholly, ya know, and not keep them all to ones lonely self, so we benefit, and then with that you would, very lovely Tinka, Al|
|Reviewed by Tracey L. O' Very (Reader)
|This is Beautifully written and so heartfelt, questions held and asked time and time again. Something unsaid that could turn this whole thing around. I feel this one so truly and must tell you, you are loved by many. Many. Remember that always.
God Bless You
|Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
|Only FOOL'S Never Make Mistakes!!
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|We all need those silent moments once in awhile, Tinky. And then we eventually realize, we are who we are, and we do the best we can.
Hope the lights come back soon!
|Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)
|I have found that when we look at ourselves first in the mirror then we can better understand our fellow man. This is an revealing write and one not too many dare to do.|
|Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain
"It's always darkest before the dawn" my friend - God has a plan for all of us! One terrific write!!
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
O, I wish that I could reach through this computer screen and give you a warm hug! This letter ripped my heart out; I am sorry you are having so much in the way of pain and sadness! But I appreciate you sharing your thoughts; this is a powerful, very eye-opening retrospective look at your deepest feelings. This was very hard for me to read, but I appreciate the time you took to express your feelings. May the pain soon subside; and may you call on The One who CAN take pain away: JESUS! I will pray for youp peace of mind Tinks!
(((((((((((((((((((((((HUGS))))))))))))))))))))))))))) *one can never have too many, i always say! i am a good hugger!* and much love, your friend in america, karen lynn in texas. :( >tears <
if you ever want to talk, you know where to email me. i will listen!
|Reviewed by George Jackson
|Tinka, never feel guilty about loving another, never doubt that we all make mistakes, we'd hardly be human if we did not. True sorrow brings true forgiveness from God. I have read much of your poetry and I seriously doubt that you are as bad as you believe yourself to be in this writing, which I liked very much. Thank you for sharing it.|