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by Chanti Niven
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Thoughts, simply romantic thoughts


If there is madness in me.
it is in loving without thought,
or reason
So in love with you
my heart flutters at the
thought of your touch.
Your touch,
an illusion my mind
has sculpted countless times.
A delicate touch
- as gentle as a dew drop
upon a leaf.
Tracing a slow journey
upon veins,
until in suspense of time
it drops...
and I awake
to find
that you,
exist only in my mind...

© Chanti 2004

 

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Reviewed by Dale Clark
I really found this so romantic.
I love this verse:

"If there is madness in me.
it is in loving without thought,
or reason"
Reviewed by Masood Lohar
Very sensual... it is all about the touch
Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
Very beautiful,

Reindeer
Reviewed by Joshua Miller (Reader)
Gentile sentiment, well done.
Reviewed by J. Allen Wilson
Wonderful expressions of love tender, yea though the mind can conceive such, the heart surrenders to make it real. Great write Chanti

Allen
Reviewed by Tobias Geissen (Reader)
Good one.
Reviewed by Kate Clifford
Beautiful haunting write!
Reviewed by Cynth'ya cynthyaspeaks@gmail.com
Love. A simple yet unexplainable emotive rush that floods us with so much more than we can plan in a 24 hour day.
blessin's and happy heartbreak-free holidays my Sistah,
cynth'ya lewis reed
Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz (Reader)
I guess I will mostly agree with Kate Burnside on this one.
I have to...as she stole my thunder.
Kate is great...I admire her work, too...but this piece above,
Chanti...is as smooth as whipped cream...and just as delicious.
Reviewed by Sage Writer (Reader)
Excellent!
Reviewed by Lori Moore
Very nice. Wonderful romance.
Reviewed by A PAX
sigh
thats why were poets...........
Reviewed by Nordette Adams
Oooh, been there done that. Wonderful write, Chanti!
Reviewed by William DeVault
Brava!
Reviewed by Paul Williams
Chnati
A beautifully crafted and sensual poem, excellent!

Blessings
Reviewed by Jeff Mason
Exceptionally beautiful poetry; and even more so, the thoughts within the poetry. Superb crafting and imagery, and in such a short space, you portray such depth of beauty and passionate emotions. -- Jeff
Reviewed by Handsum Hart
A splendid write Chanti
The best lovemaking is done in the mind.

Peace and happiness
HH
Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain
Chanti,

... and they are exceptional 'romantic thoughts' - a beautiful and romantic poem brillantly conceived and penned!!

Best wishes,

Robert
Reviewed by Daniel McTaggart
Sometimes love can be so close, yet so far. Sounds pointless, but I'd rather reach and grab air than never reach at all.
Reviewed by Phillip William Allen
A breath taking pen. At least in ones thoughts you can aquire what your heart desires.
Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Marvelous romantic thoughts, Chanti.
Reviewed by Kate Burnside
This is just breathless, Chanti! A pure distillation of what romantic love truly is. You take us there, line by line, and I love the way your thoughts link through, like a beautiful daisy-chain. Although you make us aware of the illusory nature of this love, the feelings are so strong and intense that our feelings are gripped right through to the final ellipsis - and beyond. This poem simply transcends itself, as all well-crafted writes should. Simply gorgeous and, as Regis has said, the graphic is a wonderful compliment. TY LOL Kate

Chanti - I am just left reeling from your lavish appreciation of my work, and cannot express just how much your kindness and praise has meant to me. Thank you from the bottom of my heart - I KNOW I don't deserve such accolades, but bless you so, so much. XXXXXX
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Excellent package Chanti!!

love Tinka
Reviewed by George Jackson
You should have those thoughts more often, if it makes you write this well. Beautiful.
Reviewed by Sara Coslett
Maybe so, but still a wonderful dream. Excellent poem Chanti. ~ Sara
Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers
Chanti, you've certainly captured beauty in this gem. Awesome poetry.

Lisa
Reviewed by jude forese
the ambiance of a romantic heart first begins in the mind ...

superb poem!
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Sometimes I wonder, if that's where true love, only exists?
Reviewed by Al Swanson (Reader)
this is such a good thought I think, to allow such flow, I applaud you in its creation, to glipse, to understnd, such things, to share, to allow us to recognize the purity in it, and simply ..... remember, ty Al
Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Wow! Perhaps you did have sweet dreams. You certainly have come up with a sweet creation with these verses, Chanti. And I LOVE the graphic as well. Thank you for sharing this captivating experience. Much love to you. Regis
Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger
Chanti, this is pure poetry at its finest. The raw emotions that poured through my veins as I read this, is well, to put it bluntly, were simply incredible. Thatís the true wonders of the mind, for it can bring such momentous moments and vivid visions to life. Stunning write. Bravo.
Reviewed by E T Waldron
Passionate sensual sentiments beautifully expressed Chanti! Very eloquent poem!
Reviewed by Felix Perry
So sweet and so vivid makes me wish that all love could be so simple and pure....Felix
Reviewed by Dave Harm
To choose love, in thoughts and dreams - what a wonderful concept. To find love always in our mind - how peaceful.
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