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Pain Version One
by Michelle R Kidwell Power In The Pen
Wednesday, December 22, 2004
Rated "PG" by the Author.
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It slowly eats at you
Like a silent invader
Making you cry out
You have two choices
Give in
Or Fight through it.
I choose to fight through it.
Copyright Michelle R Kidwell
December.22.2004
Please pray been having some severe hip pain...
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
12/27/2004 |
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(((michelle)))
i live with it twenty four seven, and refuse to give in to the monster...although there are days it has me in its jaws and shakes me to the core...i will win :)
keep the strong attitude and lean on God when it gets to be too much--i do
(((HUGS))) and love, karla.
powerful write :( and yes, you are still in my prayers |
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| Reviewed by George Jackson |
12/22/2004 |
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| Sometimes, there is no choice, because we can't always see it, but I liked the poem very much. |
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| Reviewed by Sarah Tagert |
12/22/2004 |
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| I know this feeling all to well. Very well Penned! |
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