|Reviewed by Amira van Kerk
|Not much left that can beat a hot shower on a cold winter's day!!!
Good one !
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|A wonderful look at what a shower can do, William. Thank you. Best wishes of love and peace to you. Regis|
|Reviewed by Faye Enno (Reader)
|Nice take on a shower.
|Reviewed by Nordette Adams
|Um, I almost said something terribly naughty, but then I remembered site rules and regulations. My inner nature stifled, I'll simply comment, lovely, William.|
|Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper
|nothing lika nice hot shower Wiliam. you captured it very well here poetically. Yes you're right, when I was on the street seems like more people got hurt during the holidays than any other time also. G|
|Reviewed by Regina Pounds
|such a sensuous write!
Happy Holidays to you..in and out of the shower.
|Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot
|That was one heck of a shower, now all I wanna know is how did the towel rub go LOL.
Ty for the Smile WILLIE hehe
|Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen
|Amusing write, William. Don't forget to moisturize afterwards!|
|Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)
|Well I must say you convinced me to go and shower earlier. My favorite pooch likes to poke his head into the water but then he is a goofy lab that likes water anyway.|
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|Is this the adult version of the movie - Free Willy?!
PS It's 20 Below with the Wind Chill here this morning - I need a very hot shower.
|Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger
|A very refreshing well-penned poetic cleansing of the body and soul! Outstanding work. Happy Holidays to you and yours, Poet.|
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Now thats called a "thingy " taking a shower....lol!!
|Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
|Here we can just go outside for a shower.
Good write willie..
|Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers
|William, There is nothing as refreshing as a first thing in the morning shower...unless it's a shared first thing in the morning shower!
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|William ,who doesn't love a shower even though I don't have a "blessed willy";-) Wonderful write!|
|Reviewed by Carole Mathys
|very interesting William.....|
|Reviewed by jude forese
|From my chest
The warm cascading continues
Passed the blessed
lol! you've got showering down to a science ...
|Reviewed by William Bonilla
|thank God I wasn't incarecrated
when I thought of this one
are you guys talking from experience????
|Reviewed by Ed Matlack
|Just don't bend over for the soap...and you think its cold there, you ought to live in a motorhome with little to NO insulation in the walls and especially the floors...THAT IS COLD!! ed|
|Reviewed by Janet Parker
|Check the spelling of the second word in the first line. This is a good write. Made me miserably cold, though.|
|Reviewed by Edwin Larson
|Freedom's a valuable thing William...'cause you don't have to worry if you drop the soap :)
Merry Christmas and be well.